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by **somesh** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 2:35 am

dostoN,

Is thread meiN ham un ash'aar ko pesh karenge jinme 'vaada' word aata ho. dhyaan rahe kewal she'r hi deN film songs nahiN.

aagaaz maiN chachaa Ghalib ke do she'roN se karta huuN.

1.

Tere vaade par jiye ham to yeh jaan jhooTh jaana
ki khushi se mar na jaate, jo aitbaar hota.

2.

Ta fir na intizaar meiN neeNd aaye umr bhar
aane ka vaada kar gaye aaye jo khwaab mein

- Somesh

somesh wrote:dostoN,

Is thread meiN ham un ash'aar ko pesh karenge jinme 'vaada' word aata ho. dhyaan rahe kewal she'r hi deN film songs nahiN.

aagaaz maiN chachaa Ghalib ke do she'roN se karta huuN.

1.

Tere vaade pe gar jiye ham to yeh jaan jhooTh jaana
ki khushi se mar na jaate, jo aitbaar hota.

2.

Ta fir na intizaar meiN neeNd aaye umr bhar
milne ka vaada kar gaye aaye jo khwaab mein

somesh ji ye silsila bhee theek hai lekin muaafi chahte huai kahna chahta hoon ke aapne jo 2 sher pesh kiye hain unhein thorhaa durust kar rahaa hoon.

tere vaade par jiye ham to ye jaan jhuuTh jaanaa
ke Khushii se mar na jaate agar aitabaar hotaa

Ta fir na intizaar meiN neeNd aaye umr bhar
aane ka ahad kar gaye aaye jo khwaab mein

ahad=vaada

ummeed hai galat na samjheinge.

by **balvinder** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 3:32 am

ab meree jaanib se.....

jhoothe vaade bhee naheen karte aap
koi jeene ka sahaaraa bhee naheen

jaleel manikpuri

by **somesh** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 6:29 am

Balvinder ji,

sheroN ko durust karne ke liye shukriya. galti meri thi mujhe yahaN dene se pehle ek baar confirm kar lena chahiye tha. jaisa mujhe yaad thha maine likh diya. agli baar se is baat ka khyaal rakhuNga.

- somesh

by **somesh** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 6:34 am

vaada phir vaada hai maiN zehar bhi pii jaauN Qateel
shart ye hai ko_ii baaNhoN meiN sambhaale mujhko

- Qateel Shifai

( ummeed hai is baar she'r sahi hai)

by **balvinder** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:20 am

main uske vaade ka ab bhee yakeen kataa hoon
hazaar baar jise aajamaa liyaa maine

makhmoor dehalvi

by **somesh** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:38 am

main uske vaade ka ab bhee yakeen kataa hoon
hazaar baar jise aajamaa liyaa maine

waah waah balvinder saahab kya she'r diya hai aapne, paRhte hi dil meiN ghar kar gaya. bahut achchhe. aise hi naayaab heere pesh karte raheN

- Somesh

by **somesh** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:03 am

din guzaaraa thha ba.Dii mushkil se
phir tera vaada-e-shab yaad aayaa

-Nasir Kazmi

by **Parul** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:56 pm

Gazab kiya tere vaade pe aitbaar kiya
Tamaam raat qayamat ka intzaar kiya

I think by Daag Dehlvi ji (not sure)

by **somesh** » Sat Jul 29, 2006 10:43 pm

vaade pe tere maine kabhi shaq nahi kiya
phir tera intizaar mujhe raat kyoN na thha?

-Shaharyar

by **balvinder** » Sun Jul 30, 2006 4:00 am

somesh wrote:
main uske vaade ka ab bhee yakeen kataa hoon
hazaar baar jise aajamaa liyaa maine

waah waah balvinder saahab kya she'r diya hai aapne, paRhte hi dil meiN ghar kar gaya. bahut achchhe. aise hi naayaab heere pesh karte raheN

- Somesh

shukriya somesh ji

aour parul ji aap bil-kul durust hain ye sher daagh sahab ka hee hai

vaade kee raat neend ne furasat unhein na dee
afsos jaag kar meree taqdeer so gayee

shafeek jaunpuri

by **ghazala** » Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:21 am

JINKO JEENE K DHANG AATE HAIN
AADE AKSER WO BHOOL JATE HAIN

by **ghazala** » Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:23 am

JINKO JEENE K DHANG AATE HAIN
VAADE AKSER WO BHOOL JATE HAIN[/u]

by **ghazala** » Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:25 am

JINKO JEENE K DHANG AATE HAIN
VAADE AKSER WO BHOOL JATE HAIN

by **Gumaan-e-mohabbat** » Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:25 am

Sabko salaam.

Mujhe maloom thii terii majbooriya magar
Tere baghair neend na aai tamaam raat,
Ummeed to bandh jaati tasqeen to ho jaati
Waada na wafaa karte waada kiya to hota..

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