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prash
| | Posted on Friday, October 22, 2004 - 11:56 am: | |
hello friends,
well as discussed in MERI AARZOO1!, we have new mehfil with title EhsaaS, I am sure that this will also be blessed by your poetic support.
Here is something i just thought, hope u like..
Fanaa ho jaane mein vishwaas chaahiye
pyar ke liye dil mein bas ehsaas chaahiye
hothon se kehne ki to zaroorat hi nahi
bas aankhon mein khamoshi ki aawaaz chahiye
anjaam ki kab fikra karte hai deewaane
bas ek khoobsurat sa aaghaaz chaahiye
zindagi ki hadh ke bhi paar pyar hai
kisi pe marke jeene ka andaaz chaahiye
is duniyaa ko apne kadamo me jhukaa denge
dil mein tera pyar, haathon mein haath chaahiye
prash
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himanshu
| | Posted on Friday, October 22, 2004 - 02:48 pm: | |
nice Prash....
ek choti si koshish
lahma kal, aaj, aur kal mein badalna chahiye
khwaabeedah zindagi ko asleeyat bananaa chahiye
is mod par baitha tha ye pal kabe se
ise to bas guzarane ka bahaana chahiye
dhadakon mein baandh kar rakhi hei zindagi,
ghubaar-e-kaarvaan se pahale tu milna chahiye |
ghaayal
| | Posted on Friday, October 22, 2004 - 08:44 pm: | |
ek chhoti si koshish
kyaa EHSAAS tumhe meraa hai?
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sooraj ki pehli kiranon mein
jab dhulaa tumhaara chehraa thaa
aur sooraj ki us laali mein
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa?
baarish ki unn boondon nein
aur abr ne ghheraa thaa
jab sar se paon tak seench gaye
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa ?
phoolon ke aadhe adhharon par
jab shabnam oas ka deraa thaa
un bheegay honton ko dekh
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa?
baagon me khiltey phoolon par
gunjte bhanvron ka pheraa thaa
aur shahed ki meethi ladhion mein
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa?
jab chandni raat ke pahloo par
shyam ka pehlaa pahraa thaa
taaron ki jhilmil jhaalar mein
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa?
jab surron nein aur saazon nein
veena ki taar ko chhedaa thaa
uus sur kii rachnaa ko sun kar
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa?
jab chaand ne ghoonghat giraa diya
aur chhaaya ghor andheraa thaa
uus tanhai ke pal mein
kya ehsaas tumhe kucch meraa thaa?
~ghaayal~
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ghaayal
| | Posted on Friday, October 22, 2004 - 08:50 pm: | |
another koshish-a response for the above
Bas tu hi mera Ehsaas hai
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uss chanda mein, uss sooraj mein
aur baarish ki unn boondon mein
palkon is uss jhaalar mein
aur raat ki maili chaadar mein
un saazon mein, un taalon mein
aur pehli oas ke pyaalon mein
un honton ki woh aahon mein
aur soonee soonee si baahon mein
bhanvron ki us gunjan mein
aur paayal ki us chhun chhun mein
jharnon ki uss run-jhun mein
ek taare ki uss tun-tun mein
ehsaas hamein bas teraa thaa !
~ghaayal~
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Divya
| | Posted on Saturday, October 23, 2004 - 12:27 am: | |
Prash,
Wah! Bahut hi sundar naam hai thread ka! Ussey zyaada khoobsurat toh aapki yeh latest posting hai. Aapke silent admirers aur chaahney waaley toh mar mittengey aap par agar aise hi likhtey gaye.
Already kya mehfil sajaaya hai Himanshu ji aur Ghaayal ji ne...aap dono ki rachnaein bhi acchi hai. Lagta hai pyaar ka EhsaaS machal raha hai gagan ke chaaro orr....kitna accha lag raha hai.
Aur Prash...Wah kya andaaz hai pyaar bayaan karne ka!!
"hothon se kehne ki to zaroorat hi nahi
bas aankhon mein khamoshi ki aawaaz chahiye"... Wah ....wah, kya baat hai!
Aapke isi concept par hum kuch likhna chaahenge...hope you like it...
Shabdo.n ki jhankar ho
Ya aankho.n ki angaar ho
Mehakti har ek saans mein
Sirf pyaar ki raftaar ho
Dhadkan ki pehchaan ho
Nazro.n ki jazbaat ho
Un labon ke sura mein
Nashaa-e-farmaan ho
Hawaa ki lehar ho
Ya phoolo.nn ka sugand ho
Ehsaas ke har ek sprash mein
Hameshaa, ulfat-e-ishq ho
Awaiting your comments...
Divya |
sunny
| | Posted on Saturday, October 23, 2004 - 01:21 am: | |
kya haal hain doston are aap sab ne toh shuru bhhi kar diya aur kya shuru kiya hai wah maza aa gaya parash aapne toh apne ahokhe andaz mein aghaaz kiya hi hai saath mein diyva aur baaki sab ne raunak bada di
chaliye ik meri taraf se bhhi
subah subah maa ne jaldi utha diya
dekha ghar mein kuchh teyariyan thhi
yaad aaya aa toh ghar mein kanjak jamani hai
naha dho kar pooja kari aur phir aasan bichaye
maa ne chauke halwa poori ke thal sajaye
choti choti deviyan aai hathon mein sukh liye
nanhe nanhe paon dhulaye aasan pe bithaya
maa ne tilak laga ke sidhi kalai pe roli bandhi
sabke thal mein poori halwe ka bhog lagaya
chunni uda ke sar pe bethi thhi saari chandi
vida kiya sabko phir nau din ka vart toda
devi ne sabke saath aise hi nata joda
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Saturday, October 23, 2004 - 03:35 am: | |
mere pyare doston,
sabse pehle is page ke bare mein kuch kehna chaunga..
is ki taazgi mujhe aisi lagi jaise subah mein paharon mein hoti hai..jaise hum ek lambi saans khichte hain.kuch aise..
aap logon ko upar padhkar yeh taazgi jaise aur badh gayi hai..
aise hi likhte rahiye taki yeh barkarar rahe..
NK |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Saturday, October 23, 2004 - 03:43 am: | |
ehsaas tumhare pyar ka is mann mein
dharkan pe bol tumhare dharakte hain
akeli zindagi mein prakash tumhara
ujjwal hum , pal pal khilte hain
tumse judi hain jeevan ki ladiyan
warna hum to kab ke mar jaate
tum bin shayad kuch jee bhi lete
par jyada din nahin jee paate
pyar na jaane kyon itna karta hain
ki khud ko hum bhulaye baithe hain
chaand ko raaton mein akela dekha karte hain
tumhe lekar naye sapney buna karte hain
aankhen band karte hi saamne aa jaati ho
palak jhapakte hi ojhal ho jaati ho
tumhara ehsaah , ehsaas ki mithas hai
shayad mere kai varshon ki pyas hai
awaiting your valuable comments..
NK
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Saturday, October 23, 2004 - 03:49 am: | |
Divya..
i liked these lines.
"Dhadkan ki pehchaan ho
Nazro.n ki jazbaat ho
Un labon ke sura mein
Nashaa-e-farmaan ho "
pyara laga padhkar..
NK |
BG
| | Posted on Saturday, October 23, 2004 - 12:23 pm: | |
tumhare paas hone ka ehsaas
zindagi mein bharta naya wishwas
main dar jata hoon is khiyal se
do qadam mein hi na chod do mera sath |
TrUe OnE
| | Posted on Sunday, October 24, 2004 - 01:00 am: | |
Prash jee bahut hi khoobsurat bazm hai....
aur title bhi bahut pyara laga .."Ehsaas"
aapki aur sabhi ki kavitaayein bahut achchhi hain...
very nice
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prash
| | Posted on Sunday, October 24, 2004 - 11:07 am: | |
hi there,
well i elated to see u all here, its been just a day since this page was created, well what can i say more
simply a big thanks and please keep going on......
here is a new concept from me...
do add more........
sapno ke hasien kuchh paudhe hain
aarzoo ke kuchh phool bhi khiley hai
aur yeh sab sirf tumse hai
hum is baare mein aur kya kahein
soon in next
prash |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Sunday, October 24, 2004 - 11:48 am: | |
tum ek dilkash ehsaas ho
khwabon mein mere paas ho
jaise sangeet ka baansuri se mail hai
tum meri zindagi ke liye anmol ho
sadiyon ki ankahi jasbaat ho
sukhe sagar ki pyaas ho
NK
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sunny
| | Posted on Monday, October 25, 2004 - 09:59 am: | |
raat ka chilman utha subah ka tamasha phir shuru hua
koi kirdaar to koi kadardaan koi jaana pehchana daku koi anchaha mehmaan
hello friends
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Divya
| | Posted on Tuesday, October 26, 2004 - 09:14 am: | |
Bahut shukriya Nishant humari kavita ko pasand karne ke liye...aapke yeh lines kitni pyaari hai....
"chaand ko raaton mein akela dekha karte hain
tumhe lekar naye sapney buna karte hain"...good one.
Aur Sunny shukriya humein itna mulya samjhne ka....magar Prash ke saamne hum kuch nahi....
Divya |
Divya
| | Posted on Tuesday, October 26, 2004 - 09:24 am: | |
Prash,
Wah!...Kya likha hai aapne...
"sapno ke hasien kuchh paudhe hain
aarzoo ke kuchh phool bhi khiley hai
aur yeh sab sirf tumse hai
hum is baare mein aur kya kahein"...wah...wah...
Bas isi se judey humarey kuch khayal aaphi ke andaaz me...hope you like it...
Pahado.n se ubharti ravi kiran hain
Ghaney raato.n me saji sasi kiran hai
Aur yeh sab sirf tumse hai
Hum is baare mein aur kya kahein
Ni-spand dil se alhadtein nadi hain
Ni-shabd kanth se rachtein svar hain
Aur yeh sab sirf tumse hai
Hum is baare mein aur kya kahein
Kalhar mann me roshini bhara hai
Maayoos aankhon me aas takraaya hai
Aur yeh sab sirf tumse hai
Hum is baare mein aur kya kahein...
Awaiting your comments...
Divya
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prash
| | Posted on Wednesday, October 27, 2004 - 03:10 am: | |
hi there, here is my addition on last post, and ofcourse it has been already completed by divya.
sunny and nishant, just develop these concepts u have started, i m waiting........meanwhile here is something hope u all like it......
sapno ke hasien kuchh paudhe hain
aarzoo ke kuchh phool bhi khiley hai
aur yeh sab sirf tumse hai
hum is baare mein aur kya kahein
dil mein armaan jagaaate kuchh arman hai
aye dil samhalna yeh katre mein toofaan hai
mushkil is afsaane ke poora hone mein yeh hai
jiska zikra hai ismein bas wahi anjaan hai
aise bhi pal hote hai
jo dil mein hameshaa rahte hain
ab wo pal kya hai kaise hai
hum is baare mein aur kya kahein
jaani pehchaani si ek tasveer dikhi hai
wo rang ubharte hai jin se meri taqdeer likhi hai
tazveer hai jiski usko bhi shaayd ehsaas hai
usne bhi shaayad meri daastaan suni hai
jo anchaahi yeh doori hai
ek sharm ki majboori hai
yeh aag baraabar lagi hai jo
hum is baare mein aur kya kahein
prash |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Wednesday, October 27, 2004 - 03:23 am: | |
intezaar tumhari raaton ka
intezaar tumhari saanson ka
tadap mere akelepan ki
tanhaiyan is kore mann ki
pyar ki woh pavitra boond
jo is zindagi mein laayegi bahar
ab mere jeevan mein hai
sirf intezaar..tumhara intezaar..
NK |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Wednesday, October 27, 2004 - 03:27 am: | |
Hi Prash,
bahut khoobsorat likhte hain aap..
"jaani pehchaani si ek tasveer dikhi hai
wo rang ubharte hai jin se meri taqdeer likhi hai
tazveer hai jiski usko bhi shaayd ehsaas hai
usne bhi shaayad meri daastaan suni hai
"
simply beautiful..
ji bilkul maine jo pehle likha hai..unhi concepts pe likh raha hun..jald hi likhunga..
NK
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sunny
| | Posted on Wednesday, October 27, 2004 - 08:13 am: | |
kapkapati thand mein zindagi jab jam jaati hai
payar bhare haton ko mal mal ke chehre teri garmi chu jaati hai
namaskar doston
kuchh hai pata nahin kaun se concept mein judega |
archana
| | Posted on Thursday, October 28, 2004 - 01:35 am: | |
thand say thithurti roshni ki lakeer
lamp post kay nichay khari zindagi ki tasveer
sooraj ki pehli kiran kay saath
ud janaywali dhuan ki lakeer ki tarah
shahar ki bheed mein kho jaayegi zindagi
kahin roti rozi ki daudh mein banegi phir
kisi masoom ki lamp post kay nichay khadi tasveer...
AH |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Thursday, October 28, 2004 - 04:22 am: | |
kuch dhaagon se juda jeevan ek ehsaas hai
in dhaagon ko naa jaane kiski talaash hai
duniya kuch ek baraste paani si hai
bhigo to jeene mein iska mazaa hai
NK |
Divya
| | Posted on Thursday, October 28, 2004 - 07:54 am: | |
Prash,
Wah! kya likha hai aapne....
"jo anchaahi yeh doori hai
ek sharm ki majboori hai
yeh aag baraabar lagi hai jo
hum is baare mein aur kya kahein"....is pe mera jawaab hota...
Suraj bhi toh hai door kahi.n
Magar garm ikhtilatein kirano.n ka ehsaas hai
Chaand bhi ojhal hai baadalo.n me kahi.n
Magar in mah-tabi raato.n me
Machalta ek gehra anuraag hai
In dooriyo.n me aise hi kuch
Tumhara pyaar ka EhsaaS hai
Ab kya paas hain...yaa door hain
Hum is baare me aur kya kahein
Door ambar ki godd mein
Badal toh basa kartein hain
Magar unse tapakti boondai.n
Humein chuaa kartein hain
In jhoomati, leharati hawaao.n mein
Un baaho.n ne alingan kiya hai
Kin, kin ajubao.n me hum tumhein
Mehsoos kiya kartein hain
Hum is baare me aur kya kahein...
Divya
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sunny
| | Posted on Thursday, October 28, 2004 - 08:53 am: | |
hello friends kya haal hain aapke main thoda busy thha isliye maaf karna waise aap sab ne kaafi achchi mehfil jama rakhi hai yahan par maine bhhi thoda kuchh alfaaz bikhre hain bataiye kaise lage kuchh jodna chahenge toh shauk farmaiyega
choti kheench ke uski mein bhaga
ooi maa woh chillai theher tujhe chodoongi nahin
meri bahen mere pichhe duad ke aai
phir sote sote mujh pe paani ki chinte maari
gusse mein aankhen khuli to ji chaha phir marun
lekin bahen pe haath nahin uthte maa ne kaha thha
kabhi mera kaam karti raat ko daer se mere liye khana banati
ruth jaane par mein usse manata bhhi
rakhi par mujhse khoob paise anteti
kabhi uske liye mein kamata bhhi
aaj nahin to kal chali jayegi
toh kisse ladoonga kisse galiyan khaoonga
kisse manoonga sochta hoon to has padte hoon
aaja chal ab khana kha le chilla rahi hai woh ab band karta hoon |
prash
| | Posted on Thursday, October 28, 2004 - 12:46 pm: | |
kabhi shaam ke aane ka
hi there, well nishant ur new concept has made me feel same like u, and i have tried to write one para here, hope u like, and i am waiting for u to complete ur one.......
hi divya, well mai kya kahoon, tumhaare expression bahut natural hai, aur the way u carry love with nature, is really marvellous, well i have been inspired by ur one, here is one , hope u like......
kabhi shab ke jaane ka
kabhi sehar ki kirno mein
raushni ko chamkaane ka
har rang ka, har nayee khushi ka intzaar hai
kyonki dil mein shaamil tumhara pyar hai
subah ki taazgi mein, tum hi taaza khushi ka ehsaas ho
thandi hawaaon mein, ghulkar jaise tum mere paas ho
khilte gulaab mein tum shabnam bikhraati ho
panchee ki tarah ped ki daali ko bhi chehkaati ho
sirf tumhaare khyaal se hi meri zindagi bahaar hai
kyonki dil mein shaamil tumhara pyar hai
mujhse kisi ne kahaa tha, ek din aisa bhi hogaa
ummeed bhi na hogi aur milegaa pyar ka tohfaa
tumko dekhke lagtaa hai wo jo bhi tha sach tha
khushiyon ka tohfaa hogaa, tumse badhkar kya
ab aa bhi jao, paas mere mujhe kab se intzaar hai
kyonki dil mein shaamil tumhara pyar hai
prash |
kashish verma
| | Posted on Friday, October 29, 2004 - 04:06 am: | |
hi prash,
i have no words to admire u, well here is a aghazal i liked most.....
badaa ajeeb muhabbat ka yeh fasaana hai
dil hai tera too kisi aur ka deewna hai
panah lega kis chaman mein, kis shajar pe too
har ek shaakh pe mera hi aashiyaana hai
too kis tarhaa se bachegaa nazar ke teeron se
har ek simt se tera hi dil nishaana hai
kashish
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prash
| | Posted on Friday, October 29, 2004 - 04:48 am: | |
thanks kashish, well its nice to see u with some poetry, really that's great one.........
here is something i have inspired after reading sonia's page hari baabsuri (green flute)...
baadlon ke aanchal se chandni muskuraai hai
fir kisi deewane ne bansuri bajaai hai
kaun hai kya naam aur kis dess mein rahti hai
aakhir kaun hai wo ladki jo sapno mein aaye hai
raat ki yeh shokhiyaan dekhte hi banti hai
ghoonghat mein jaise koi dulhan sharmaai hai
mere khayaaol mein jab se tum aaye ho
mehfil se zyada rangeen meri yeh tanhaai hai
prash
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sunny
| | Posted on Friday, October 29, 2004 - 07:47 am: | |
hello friends
parash bhai aapka toh jawab nahin jo aapne upar likha hai bahut hi khubsurat hai khaskar ke yeh misre
raat ki yeh shokhiyaan dekhte hi banti hai
ghoonghat mein jaise koi dulhan sharmaai hai
mere khayaaol mein jab se tum aaye ho
mehfil se zyada rangeen meri yeh tanhaai ha
sach mein achcha laga inhey pad kar aur kashish bahiya aap ki kalam se bhhi kucch alfaz tapke dekh ke achcha laga likhte rahiyega ik meri taraf se bhhi
raat ke kaale sannate ko bharti hui fhoki fhoki boondon ki aawaz
kuchh ehsaas nahin naa hi kuchh mehsus karti hai
naa dukh naa sukh naa khushi naa gham bas chup chap barasti rehti hai
aansun ban ke patton ke kabhi ban ke shabnam tere galon pe barasti hai boonden
dekha jaaye toh inmein kuchh nahin aankhen band karo toh kitna kuchh
thake thake din ke baad bistar pe late hue maa jab balon mein haath firaye
kissi gumnaam aashique ko apne gille gille tasuvar-e-mehbub yaad aayee
ik nayee naveli dulhan suhag raat mein ghunghat mein sharmaye
tuti nangi jhopdi mein charpai pe kissi ki zindagi maut ki khaer manaye
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Friday, October 29, 2004 - 09:51 am: | |
unjaani lakiron se banayi teri duniya
pholon se phir sajayi hai teri duniya..
NK
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Friday, October 29, 2004 - 12:06 pm: | |
Prash,
jaan ke badi khushi hui ki aap bhi usi state se hain jahan se hum hain.Hamara rajya hai hi itna acchha ki aap jaise log yahin se hain.
NK |
prash
| | Posted on Sunday, October 31, 2004 - 03:07 am: | |
hi there, kashish, sunny, divya, nishant and all great people concerned with poetry here is something i liked most of my work so far....
sare mehfil aap ke hosh ude se kyon the
anjaan ho to mera naam sunkar mude kyon the
yeh sab tumhaari aankhon ka kusoor hai
poocho inse ki dil ke haalaat bahe kyon the
jo aandhi toofaan ko aasani se jhel gaye
wo chiraag bechain saanson se bujhe kyon the
sadiyon baad sooraj dikha, aur fir barsaat ho gai
sab poochhte hai ki tumhaare baal khule kyon the
hum tumse na milte na yeh kambahht ishq hota
tum aakhir mere ghum ke aage khade kyon the
This concept is full of possibilities to be explored more and more, so certainly, aap ke zahan mein bhi kuchh khayaal ubhar rahe honge, so why wait, please add more over here
prash
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Divya
| | Posted on Sunday, October 31, 2004 - 06:26 am: | |
Prash,
Aap hi ke ghazal me humare kuch khayal...hope you like it...
Akele tanhaai me khush the hum
Chodd na hi tha toh saath detein kyoun the
Jab bhujaani thi pyaar ki sushma tumhein
Dil me aas ki jyoti jalaatein kyoun the
Andho-nak asit bhari raaton mein
Arunaai subah dikhaatein kyoun the
Judaai ke ghum se jab behte the saagar
Tumhari aankhon me bhi aasoon jhalakte kyoun the
Jab godna hi tha bhitarin humein
Toh jhoote vaadon se ghao bhartein kyoun the...
Divya |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Sunday, October 31, 2004 - 07:19 am: | |
mera vrat rakha hai tumne
gehnon se tum saji hui ho
pyar tumhara sabse bada hai
abhar kabhi na chuka paunga
shayad kahin door padi ho mujhse
par dil sansar mein nazar aati ho
agar yun hi puja karti rahogi
main bhi tumhe aise pujta rahunga..
NK
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Sunday, October 31, 2004 - 07:22 am: | |
prash,
aapka concept accha laga
NK |
Divya
| | Posted on Monday, November 01, 2004 - 02:58 am: | |
Hi friends,
Bas aise hi kuch likh rahi hoon...hope you all like it...
Hawaa ka jhonka
Lali ka jhalaka
Phoolon se ladaa
Hai swapno ka ladka
Ankhon ka taara
Meri jeevan dhara
Teja bheja hua
Ek isha anugraha
Aise chede kabhi
Naino ki boli
Jaise tivra se
Mann ko ho choo gayi
Tikshana ho nazar
Jo kar jaaye asar
Ho aankhon ki kashish
Jinme doob jaayein andar
Divya |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Monday, November 01, 2004 - 05:22 am: | |
tera pyar jaise subah ke oss ki boond
tera ikraar jaise jhoomti hui baarish
teri khushboo jaise baagon mein phool
tera itrana jaise ek natkhat.t si bel
tera ehsaas jaise janmon ka mila pyar
teri julphein jaise lehrati hui sarsoon
teri mithaas jaise gud ki antim mithas
tera vishwas jaise band aankhon mein prakash..
NK |
Divya
| | Posted on Monday, November 01, 2004 - 11:24 pm: | |
Nishant,
"tera vishwas jaise band aankhon mein prakash.."...Yeh line bahut acchi hai.
Divya |
Divya
| | Posted on Monday, November 01, 2004 - 11:28 pm: | |
Hi Friends,
Ek aur kalpana humari...
Kuch bhi na keh ke kehna
Rooth ke bhi paas me hona
Chup chup ke aahein bharna
Pyaar hai!....kehti hai naina
Ruk jao, abh naa jao
Na aur humein tadpao
Yu.n palkhein na jhukao
Nazar se nazar milao
Yeh dil pighal raha hai
Kya tumhein kuch pataa hai
Tumse judd gaya hai
Kya tumhein kuch pataa hai...
Divya |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 02, 2004 - 10:26 am: | |
Divya,
bahut hi pyar se ,pyar bhare shabdon mein likha hai aapne.main jab upar ki lines padh raha tha tab sirf matlab pe dhyan de raha tha..superb..
aaj kal yahan kuch khaas logon ki kami bhi lag rahi hai..mera matlab hai Sunny ji aur prash ji..
aap log kahan hin bhai?..wapas aayiye jaldi..
NK |
sunny
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 03, 2004 - 07:27 am: | |
NK naraz mat ho yaar hum yahin hain kahin nahin gayee
abhhi na parda girao thehro ki fasana aage aur bhhi hai
yeh ishque guzra hai ik jahan se ik jahan aage aur bhhi hai
abhhi jo bas jism hi mara hai abhhi toh tuti hai kachcha mitti
abhhi kahin baar marna hoga
ki zindagi aage aur bhhihai |
sagar_vishvaraj
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 03, 2004 - 08:59 am: | |
aaj aye hai maikhana e jasb me saagar
aaj pani bhi zaam ho jaye
hasrat hai k mai kashi ho kuch aise
jo piye saagar us ek zaam me
umr e saagar tamam ho jaye
yaar mehfil ko sahib e saagar ka salam
ijahare jasbat hai sagar k is mehfile shaur k naam
na shaur na ilm aur na tehzib s raha rishta
fir bhi
lafj e khamosha ko tartib e harf ham bhi diya karte hai
na sahi ilm e raushani se jagmate hue
kahkasha e kirdar ko rukhhshar e harf
ham bhi diya karte hai
na mile mehfil me jagah na sahi chasma e mehfil pe khaade ham bhi hua karte hai
ha ahahaa a ahahha ahaa haha aha ah
assssalam mehfil
bhai ummid hai iss bade jahan o jahhan walo ki duniya me is bejahan JAHHAN [SAGAR VISHVARAJ] ko bhi thodi jagah milegi .....aap sab ka ijahare jasb kabil e tarif hai aap sab ko dil e ajij sagar ke tajo me chchupe pak jasbat kabul ho dua hai umr e mehfil umr e jahhan se bhi lambi aur raushan ho |
sagar_vishvaraj
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 03, 2004 - 09:00 am: | |
aaj aye hai maikhana e jasb me saagar
aaj pani bhi zaam ho jaye
hasrat hai k mai kashi ho kuch aise
jo piye saagar us ek zaam me
umr e saagar tamam ho jaye
yaar mehfil ko sahib e saagar ka salam
ijahare jasbat hai sagar k is mehfile shaur k naam
na shaur na ilm aur na tehzib s raha rishta
fir bhi
lafj e khamosha ko tartib e harf ham bhi diya karte hai
na sahi ilm e raushani se jagmate hue
kahkasha e kirdar ko rukhhshar e harf
ham bhi diya karte hai
na mile mehfil me jagah na sahi chasma e mehfil pe khaade ham bhi hua karte hai
ha ahahaa a ahahha ahaa haha aha ah
assssalam mehfil
bhai ummid hai iss bade jahan o jahhan walo ki duniya me is bejahan JAHHAN [SAGAR VISHVARAJ] ko bhi thodi jagah milegi .....aap sab ka ijahare jasb kabil e tarif hai aap sab ko dil e ajij sagar ke taho me chchupe pak jasbat kabul ho dua hai umr e mehfil umr e jahhan se bhi lambi aur raushan ho |
Divya
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 03, 2004 - 09:26 am: | |
Hi Friends,
Acchi baat hai finally Sunny aagaya. Aapko yahan dekh kar accha lag raha hai.
"abhhi na parda girao thehro ki fasana aage aur bhhi hai
yeh ishque guzra hai ik jahan se ik jahan aage aur bhhi hai"...wah...wah...kya kaha hai aapne!
Aur sagar ji aapka to swagat hai, kyoun nahi milega aapko yahan jagah. Is mansh par jin jin ko kavita likhni ho un sab ki bazm hai yeh. Prash toh darya dil hai.... Ummeed hai ke aapse aur bhi sunne ko milega.
Divya |
arpita
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 03, 2004 - 03:48 pm: | |
Ek chotti see pehli koshish meri aur se........
Aaj pata nahin kyoon udaasi see chayee hai.
dil nahin lagta mera kissi ne aisee dhunn sunaayee hai.
Koi nahin hai jisse hum yaad karein..
fir bhi jaane kyoon yeh ajeeb see rusvaayi hai.
aye darde dil yeh to bataa ki kya huyaa tujhe..
kyoon aaj ashkon se aankh bhar aayi hai.
pata nahin kya huyaa hai aaj..kyoon mann mein yeh baat aayee hai.
samay ki koi khabar nahin..kyoon aaisee raat aayi hai.
shikwaa bhi nahin kar sakte kissi se..aisee soorat bann aayi hai.
Aasmaan par taare bhi nahin rahe..suraj ne aisee kirnein payeen hain.
hum abb takk vaheen bethein hain..lagta hai jaise kissi ne vo dhunn fir aazmaayi hai.
hai yakeen humein ki yeh din bhi guzar jayegga..jaise mushkil se saari raat guzaari hai.
abb aur likha bhi nahin jaata..haathon mein jaise ajeeb se chingaari hai.
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sagar vishvaraj
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 01:03 am: | |
dhanywad mehfil dhanyawad divya aur prash ko
achcha prayash tha arpita par bhawnao me uljhan jyada thi jisne aapke prayash ko bhi uljha kar rakh diya......hummmmm....mai samjhta hun ek writer ek poet aur ek saffak aine me jyadah fark nahi hota aur aina.........well...mai urdu juban ko jyadah ishtemal karta hun par hindi bhi mujhe itni hi yari hai jitni urdu aaj kuchch hindi tawajjo chahunga sari mehfil ki pesh hai
pyasa
swar nahi dena ata mujhe bhawnao ko
tum samjhate to ho
nih swar sabdo ki bhasha hai jo mujhe ati hai
tum jante to ho
mai nahi keh sakta kisi se hriday ki wyatha
mai nahi keh sakta kisi se antar ki katha
tumhe hai pata
aatm vishwash ke jis vishal rath par
hokar sawar mai nikla tha vijay ko
mashtishk aur hriday rupi ashwa uske
mar gaye marubhumi me
chaturmukhi pratibhao ke sare pahiye
ho gaye vidirn pashano se
mahatwakanksha rupi sarthi ne bishar di apni kala hokar shok santapt
ab mai jo akela thaka jiwan ko
dho raha hu apne vyathit kandho par
ho chuka hu nishabd bhul chuka hun
paribhashaye sabhi bhawnao ki
vishwash kho chuka hun sambandho me
udasin ho chuka hun swayam se
na hasu to kya karu tum wyakul ho
sun ne mere bhawpurn swar
mai jo nisabd ho kar sikh gaya hun
sun na swar sabhi naad athawa anad
sunta hun samjhta bhi hun
parantu kshama karna nahi hai mere pas wo swar
jo tumhari bhasha hai
nahi hai wo bhaw jo tumhari jigyasha hai
nahi hai wo sparsh jo tumhari abhilasha hai
samjhte kyu nahi jal se bhara ye sagar
nahi bujha sakta swayam apni pyas
tumko kaha se karega tusht
sagar to swayam janmo se pyasa hai
ha ahaha ahaha ahahaa haha aha
asssallam mehfil
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prash
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 01:49 am: | |
HI THERE,
a warm welcome to sagar and arpita, nice to see ur additions, we will look forward more from you great people,
here is couple of lines, i could write today, as always i invite all u to add and make it complete, i will try and add later, any ways, take care
tera yeh fasaana kuchh sunaa sunaa sa lagaa
ismein zaahir dard mujhe shayad apna sa lagaa
kya yaad aaya ki mere ashq pighal gaye
chalo gamo ki sardi mein kuchh to gunguna lagaa
prash
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 01:55 am: | |
Prash ..i am adding few lines..
teri aarzoo mein toote kai armaan hain
teri mohaabat mein gali gali badnam hain
chaahat mein teri zindagi dushwar hai
hum ab saari duniya ko bhulaye baithe hain
NK
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sagar vishvaraj
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 02:09 am: | |
marhaba prash subhan allahhh aap samajh gaye honge mai kis baat k liye daad de raha hun lo do line
yaad shayad mujhe wo mera kal aa raha hai
sath gujra hua tere har pal aa raha hai
mo majburiya pakija wo masum sitam aa raha hai
wo sare vade tere wo tute mere kasam aa raha hai
sayad han sayad ai mere dost teri kahani me
prash ko yaad apni muhhabat aur apna sanam aa raha hai
tumhare liye prash
asssalam mehfil |
Divya
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 04:07 am: | |
Hi Friends,
My small addition too....
Intazaar ka mausam kyoun thamm sa gayaa
Chaa gayi kyoun aise baadalon ka saaya
Kyoun ubharti nahi dhoop inse
Woh ujjval sona kahaan chup gayaa
Divya
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sunny
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 07:00 am: | |
khushaamdid doston habib kaise hain aap sab
diyva, Parash, NK, Sagar Arpita aap ka swagat hai
Diyva woh mera nahin hai Gulzar saab ka hai lekin mujhe padne mein bahut achcha laga isliye main chahta thha ki aap sab bhhi isse pade mujhe umeed thhi ki aap ko bhhi pasand aayega. Iska bahut sundar gaan abhi hai woh Gulzarfansyahoogroups par File naam ka folder hai usm,ein available hai suniyega rooh khil uthegi. Sagar arpita aap logo ka swagat hai aur bahut sundar aagaaz kiya hai aapne bahut achche
Raat ka chilman utha
Saher-e-Baazeechaa phir shuru hua
kirdaar bhhi hai kadardan bhhi
jaana pehchana daaku,anjaana sa mehman bhhi
lochi ki riksha nikli saab ki motor bhhi
husta hai kaise woh sab kuchh kho kar bhhi
jadon ki jami raat gheesa bahar kohra od ke soya
garmiyon ki bhari duphari aaftaab ki garmi mein roya
taali bajate hain dekh ke tamasha
haath naa dukh jaayen inte dhayan se
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darshi
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 07:53 am: | |
jaane ye kaisa ehsaas hai,....
koi dooor hokar bhi paaas hai....
aaj phir jeeene ki tamanna hai
aaj phir ek nayi aaas hai.... |
arpita
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 12:11 pm: | |
Thank you all for nice welcome....here are some additions prash: -
Mera dard kissi ko apna sa lagaa
Beeta hooya kall mujhe sapna sa lagaa
patjhar ka patta jaise jhoomne lagaa
toota hooya tara kissi ko moti sa lagaa
-arpita |
arpita
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 12:14 pm: | |
Ek aur choti see koshish: -
Iss Ehsaas ki gehraayee ko naap kar dekho
Iss Aas ki sachayee ko pehchaan kar dekho
Agar khushiyaan naa haassil hon
to gamon ko yaad kar ke dekho. |
prash
| | Posted on Thursday, November 04, 2004 - 11:53 pm: | |
hi sunny, nishant, divya, kashish, darshi, arpita sagar and all great people, here is the latest i wrote this morning......
hope u like....
jo humse kho gaye kahin, wo pal ab apne nahi
aye mere dil aage chal, yeh apne sapne nahi
dil ki jo thi aarzoo
bikhar gai banke khushboo
auron ko to milaa sukoon
lekin mai hi tanhaa hoon
jitnaa bharnaa chaaha, zakhm utne gehre huye
aaj bhi intzaar mein, mere kadam hai thhehre huye
dil halka ho jata thoda jo mai ro letaa
lekin sookhi ankhon se ashq bhi behne nahi
aye mere dil aage chal, yeh apne sapne nahi
jo ghum mujhko haasil hai
meri shaayari mein shaamil hai
sach hai jo dil ka kaatil hai
wo seene mein mera dil hai
bheegi ret hai kadmo mein, aur sar pe dhoop hai
jalte bujhte chalte hai, meri qismat kya khoob hai
mai chalne rukne ki baaatein to kartaa hoon
par sach hai tere bina kadam uthhne nahi
aye mere dil aage chal, yeh apne sapne nahi
prash
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Friday, November 05, 2004 - 06:42 am: | |
dil mein kisi ke khwaab hain
unjaani si kuch parchaiyan hain
uljhanon mein mann ka alam hai
naye sapnon se jahan abad hai
koi to likheka is dil pe apna naam
shayad usi ka har pal intezaar hai
ab pal tanha zara bhi nahin kat.ta
har roz yeh kahaniyan tadpati hain
NK |
sagar vishvaraj
| | Posted on Friday, November 05, 2004 - 08:01 am: | |
hi friends mehfile nadile abad ko sahibe sagar ka sallam
na dekha kuch jo dekha wo galat tha
na samjha kuch ke samjha to kami thi
jo samjhe asma nikali zami thi
kiye hai band ankhe jab se hamne
hua mehsus duniya ye hansi thi
zara ham bhi samjh le gam ka matlab
koi hamko bhi bataye sanam ka matlab
zara ham bhi samjh le jidgi ko
koi hamko bataye ham ka matlab
zara ham bhi kare koi safar ab
koi hamko nibhaye do kadam bas
zara ham bhi jiye ko jindgi ab
koi to sath aye do kadam bas
zara sa muskura le ham bhi yaro
lagaye ghaw koi dil pe ik bas
hame bhi gungunane ki hai hasarat
mile ko dard hamko ik fakat bas
naseeb sagar ko hasil kuch to hoga
ho wo dard o gam yahi hasrat hai ab bas
asssallam mehfil |
kashish
| | Posted on Friday, November 05, 2004 - 01:05 pm: | |
hi there,
well dekhiye prash aapl\ki shaayari ka asar kitne log khinche chale aate hai, aur yeh ab poori bazm ka most visited page ban gayaa hai,
khair, aapki is poetry mein kuchh nayaa nahi hai yahi last wali mein, wahi shaandaar vichaar
wahi khoobsoorat alfaaz wahi zindagi ki tarah ajnabi aur wahi dua ki tarah maasoom
mai sochti hoon ki kya aap galati se bhi ek ordinary shaayari likh sakte hain, i can bet and sure that u r naturally brilliant
so keep it on i visit this page twice a day, and always feel elated to see all ur friends new friends always keep this page alive and refreshed,
well i am also willing to wish u all a very happy shaayari further, aisa nahi hai ki mai prash ke alava aur kisi ki poetry nahi padti, but to be honest sabse pehle prash ki hi padhti hoon,
well take care
kashish verma |
Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Saturday, November 06, 2004 - 03:49 am: | |
Hi friends,
kuch mann mein yeh ajeeb se kahyal aa rahe the, is liye likh raha hun..
aaj armaan hai tumhe haathon se sajaun
kangan ko tumhari kalaiyon mein pehnaun
chamakti hui bindiya ko mathe pe lagaun
baandhun tumhare pairon mein paayaliya
sunahre gehnon se tumhe bhar poor sajaun
aur pyar se tumse dinbhar dekhta rahun..
NK
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Saturday, November 06, 2004 - 03:58 am: | |
hawaon mein ek taazgi hai
par kyon har taraf yeh tanhayi hai
suraj nikla hai,roshni hai
phir kyon nahin meri parchai hai
vishvaas hai,ek din hoga savera
phir kisne yeh kaali raat baithayi hai
mann agar udaas hai har pal
phir kisne door,yeh biin bajayi hai
NK |
archana
| | Posted on Saturday, November 06, 2004 - 04:57 am: | |
haathon mein bandhi hai churiyaan
pairon mein padi hai payal
angan mein tulsi ki kayaari par
ek deep asha ka ab bhi jal raha hai
yeh kaisa andhera hai jo subhe tak jal raha hai...
AH |
sunny
| | Posted on Saturday, November 06, 2004 - 06:50 am: | |
hello doston kya haal hai aapka bahut hi Marghoob likhawat dekhne ko mil rahi hai sab se Parash Archana Nishant Kumar aur ab toh kashish ne bhhi mehfil mein tashrif rakhi hai chalo achcha hai
khali khali naina tere aansun bhhi nahin
koi gila koi shikwa is dil se bhhi nahin
Isque karne ki fursat kisse yahan par
jine ka hosh nahin marne ki fursat kisse yahan par
shab-e-tanhai kabhi guzri nahin in aankhon mein
gungunaya nahin kissi ka chehra is be-kas sanson mein
kissi ki baton ka baar baar sunne ka mann karta hi nahin
apni badbadahat se fursat milti hi nahin
nahin lagta shaam ko koi intezar kar raha hoga
ghar jaane ki fursat kissi ko nahin
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TrUe OnE
| | Posted on Saturday, November 06, 2004 - 11:52 pm: | |
Madhur tere ehsaas se pulkit hua hai mann
teri saanso ki khushboo se mahak raha Gulshan
Sheetal sheetal chandni aur ye baadal saghan
jaise pyaasi dharti par khul ke barsaa jal paawan
AnuThhi hamari Preet ki Dor ka JuD gaya bandhan
jaise man se man ka ho Gaya ho Ghathbandhan
Khule Aaakash mein jaise uD raha ho panchhi magan
tumhare prem mein ho sarobar jhhumta hai aise mann |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Sunday, November 07, 2004 - 09:47 am: | |
Hi friends,
I have switched to my alloted user id on ebazm.
that is "Nishant".So i would now post under the same.
regards,
NK |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Sunday, November 07, 2004 - 10:18 am: | |
khayalon mein kaun aa raha hai
aaj dil mein kaun gaa raha hai
tumhari awaz badi dur tak aayi
akeli naa reh paayi meri tanhaayi
socha main bhi ek awaz lagaun
par shayad tum use sun na pao
raat ki thandi chandni raat mein
chhat pe bahar jarror aana
taaron mein main tumhe dikh jaunga
tum phir meri chaandni raat ban jaana
NK |
prash
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 02:50 am: | |
hi there, here is a couple......
yeh kahaan aa gaye kadam, tujhe dhoondhte huye
kho gaye andhere mein parchhaiyaan pochhte huye
shukra hai ishq ki galiyaam to haasil hui
manzil bhi mil jaayegi, ek din dhoondhte huye
please complete it...
prash
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sunny
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 06:48 am: | |
parash kuchh ijafa kar raha hoon umeed hai aapko passand aayega
chalte chalte thak jaate to tera chehra yaad karte
sukhe sukhe zuban tere isqu-e-aab ki fariyaad karte
registan mein us saarab ki tarah phir tera chehra nazar aaya
dil-e-dasht mera sirf sar basar aaya |
Divya
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 06:57 am: | |
Hope you like my addition...
Pratiksha me base pratiaas tum ho
Alhadtein nadiyon ke raas tum ho
Udayast mein pyaar ki subhita huey
Mere sukumar jeevan ke subha-grah huey
Kaddam aa pahuchein,dhoodtein huey
Manzil ho tum, aur tum mere huey...
Some hinid words used...
*Subhita- auspicious time/season
*Sukumar jeevan- young graceful tender life
*Subha-grah- Lucky star
Divya |
sunny
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 07:02 am: | |
parash kuchh ijafa kar raha hoon umeed hai aapko passand aayega
chalte chalte thak jaate to tera chehra yaad karte
sukhe sukhe zuban tere isqu-e-aab ki fariyaad karte
registan mein us saarab ki tarah phir tera chehra nazar aaya
dil-e-dasht mera sirf sar basar aaya |
sagar vishvaraj
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 08:48 am: | |
yaar divya ya hindi me likho ya urdu me ye bhasha ka kachara na karo please
apne har satya ko asatya kar raha hun
awyakt apne samast wyakt kar raha hun
jiwha ko pradan kar raha hun viram
jivan ko pradan kar raha hun vishram
na satya ki paricharcha hai
na asatya ki paribhasha hai
gati viram gyan aur vigyan sunya se samast
janm se mrityu tak prapy samast nirarthak
athwa se arthat gyat se agyat manaw matr vimarshak
jivan matr jigyasu man ki ek bhramit khoj ant tak
asssalam mehfil
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Divya
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 10:22 am: | |
Sagar ji,
Shaayad aapko pataa nahi ke humne hindi me hi likha hai aur humein pataa hai ke shaayad istamal kiye shabd sab ko samajh me naa aaye isi kaaran humne unke arth likhe anth me.
Paancho ungliya ek jaise toh nahi hotein hai aur kaafi samajh hai humein iske baare mein... toh agar aap humari rachna ko napasand kartein hai toh usme hairaani ki koi baat nahi hai aur naa hi koi farak padta hai humein aur naa hi humein boora laga.
Sagar ke lehar hi hai kitne
Unginnat nadiya bahein isme
Har nadi ka raas hi hai alag
Woh sagar hi kya, jo na samjhe
Divya |
arpita
| | Posted on Monday, November 08, 2004 - 03:25 pm: | |
few lines:-
abb hum din kaat rahe hain apko yaad karte karte
kaise saari zindaggi jiyengge hum aap par marte marte
aye khuda abb to sun le duyaa meri
nahin to hum marr hi jayeinge unka intzaar karte karte.
baadlon ne bhi paani barsaa diyaa hai darte darte
pedon ne bhi gungunaa diyaa hai jharte jharte
hawayein bhi aa rahi hain jhoomte sarsaraate
umeed hai shayad woh bhi aa jayein iss taraf yoonhi chalte chalte.
kabhi tanhayiyon mein hum rotte hain chupke chupke
kabhi mehfillon mein gaate hain haste haste
lekin yeh koi nahin samajhta ki hum jee rahe hain yoonhi girte girte.
-arpita |
sunny
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 09, 2004 - 08:05 am: | |
lado mat lado mat jismein marzi likho ladia mat karo apna hi hai sab sagar chaliye ik suniye
kaala chauga pehne aakash aaya phir raat ko
badlo ki jaeb se safed chand nikala
suraj ki lal gaed ludak ke ddosri taraf chali gayee
taron ki nakashi se woh khada itraya
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arpita
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 10, 2004 - 08:30 am: | |
hi friends:
bachpan ka ek meetha ehsaas likh rahi hoon....isse poora zaroor kijiyegga: -
khyabon ki zubaani ek khyab suna rahi hoon
zindaggi ki ek khulli kitaab suna rahi hoon
koi sunn ne vaala mill jaye abb
haal-e-bachpan mein ajj appna suna rahi hoon.
panchiyon ka gungunanaa hawaayon ka sarsaraana
phoolon ka muskaana barsaat mein nahaana
doston se khelna patanggon ko udaana
har ek pall ki kahaani mein ajj suna rahi hoon.
chatt par charna aur guddiyon ko sajaana
maa ka daantna aur fir rooth kar dikhaana
baba ka manaana fir pyar se khaana khillaana
dastaan-e-bachman mein aaj appna dikha rahi hoon.
sardi ki dhoop aur daadi ki kahaaniyaan
ghar kaa angan aur uss ki kursiyaan
abb bhi yaad aati hain vo kabhi kabhi aane vaali tanhayiyaan
bachpan bhi ek ehsaas hai iss liyee ajj vo ehsaas darshaa rahi hoon.
-arpita |
prash
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 10, 2004 - 11:49 am: | |
hi there, divya, nishant, sunny hope u like additions to arpita's concept.
well arpita i was thinking from a long time to write on this concept, but u have started this, here is a couple of lines, hope u like..
aankhon ke aage jaise rangeen baadal chhaa gaye
humko meethi shabnam se jaise wo bhigaa gaye
wo sapne mein rakhkar koi guzraa pal lautaa gaye
kisi ki baatein sunke bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye
prash
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Thursday, November 11, 2004 - 01:26 am: | |
HI all great people out there,
archana ji,Divya,Prash and sunny.....
wish you aal a dhamakedar diwali full of joy and happiness.
NK |
sagar vishvaraj
| | Posted on Thursday, November 11, 2004 - 06:25 am: | |
divya khash apke liye
1; kadam is not hidi
2:alhadtein what it is
3:manzil what it is divya aur bhi ek jagah galti hai....aur han divya nuks bhi unhi me nikala jata hai jo kisi kabil hote hai jinse galtio ki un galtio ki jo jane me hoti hai unki ummid nahi ki jati...aapko bura laga muafi chahunga age khyal rakhunga ki apko galtiya batane wale log achche nahi lagte divya ek baar fir maufi lijiye khash aapke liye chand line
na samjhe wajud e khud ko
kya samjhoge tum sagar ko?
sagar utane hi nahi
jitne kuwwat e nigah e tu
gina hoga kinare baih kar
napi hogi nigaho se sagar
khudai nur ki taswir sagar
lahar e sagar bhi gina jaye hai?
wajud e sagar se mutasir nadiya
ahwal e sagar ki tadbir nadiya
ho mukkamal ko mile sagar me
pyas sagar ki bujha payi hai ?
bole ko asan lafj sagar hai
kahe ko bejan lafj sagar hai
jidgi sagar ki hai lanat sagar ko kya paye hai
faqar wajud e duniya rahe kayam ko bas jiye hai
aur haan divya urdu ashan hai par hindi !! hindi ke ek ek lafj me sagar si hi gahrai hoti hai.......samjhne ko shaur aur sabr darkar hota hai..bord par maine bhi ek hindi kavita likhi hai
padho aur batao ke maine usme urdu ya farasi kaha ishtemal kiya hai..
ek baar fir muafi ka talabgar
ummid hai bade dil o dimag wali uche samajh o shaur wali divya ji is nadide nashukre bedil nachij khakshar sagar ko muaf farmayengi
apka shukriya apne mere message ko padha
asssallam mehfil
faqat ek boond mahaj do katra magar
sagar hun mai |
jahhan
| | Posted on Thursday, November 11, 2004 - 06:50 am: | |
yaar sunny tu hamesha nockout karta hai
well ladai nahi hai re ....chal chchod
khush kiya bahot khush
aur arpita aunty wo khyabon kya hai samajh nahi aya
sayad khwabo ya khalon hai hai na agar han to achcha hai |
arpita
| | Posted on Thursday, November 11, 2004 - 07:45 am: | |
jahhan jee:
"khyabon" - dreams or u can spell it as "khaabon"
samajh mein aaya??
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Mukhhlis
| | Posted on Thursday, November 11, 2004 - 09:39 am: | |
Jee Arpita waise jahhan ki spelling bahut poor hai theek kiya jaye to bahut zyada theek karna padega...Baazauqaat to samajh mein hi nahin aataa kiyaa likha hai.
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divya khash (khhaas) apke liye
1; kadam (Qadam)is not hindi
2:alhadtein (Alhadpan) what it is
3:manzil what it is divya aur bhi ek jagah galti (Ghalti) hai....aur han divya nuks (Nuqs) bhi unhi me nikala jata hai jo kisi kabil (Qabil)hote hai jinse galtio (Ghaltiyon) ki un galtio(Ghaltiyon) ki jo jane me hoti hai unki ummid nahi ki jati...aapko bura laga muafi chahunga age khyal rakhunga ki apko galtiya (Ghaltiyon)batane wale log achche nahi lagte divya ek baar fir (phir) maufi lijiye khash (Khhas) aapke liye chand line
na samjhe wajud e khhud ko
kya samjhoge tum sagar (Saghar)ko?
sagar (Saghar)utane hi nahi
jitne kuwwat (Quwat) e nigah e tu
gina hoga kinare baih kar
napi hogi nigaho se sagar
khudai nur ki taswir sagar
lahar e sagar bhi gina jaye hai?
wajud e sagar se mutasir nadiya
ahwal e sagar ki tadbir nadiya
ho mukkamal ko mile sagar me
pyas sagar ki bujha payi hai ?
bole ko asan lafj sagar hai
kahe ko bejan lafj sagar hai
jidgi sagar ki hai lanat sagar ko kya paye hai
faqar wajud e duniya rahe kayam ko bas jiye hai
aur haan divya urdu ashan (Aasaan)hai par hindi !! hindi ke ek ek lafj (Lafz)me sagar (Saaghar)si hi gahrai hoti hai.......samjhne ko shaur (Sha~ur)aur sabr darkar hota hai..bord (Board)par maine bhi ek hindi kavita likhi hai
padho aur batao ke maine usme urdu ya farasi (Farsi) kaha ishtemal (Istem~aal)kiya hai..
ek baar fir (phir)muafi ka talabgar
ummid hai bade dil o dimag wali uche samajh o shaur wali divya ji is nadide nashukre bedil nachij (Naachiz) khakshar (khhaaksaar) sagar ko muaf farmayengi
apka shukriya apne mere message ko padha
asssallam mehfil
faqat ek boond mahaj (mehaz) do katra (Qatraa) magar
sagar (Saaghar)hun mai
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jahhan
| | Posted on Friday, November 12, 2004 - 01:04 am: | |
well arpita thanks a lot it was khwabon but arpita i didnt listened before word like khyabon
kya aap bata sakengi ke aapne is word [khyabon ] ko kaha se liya |
jahhan
| | Posted on Friday, November 12, 2004 - 02:15 am: | |
uncle janaab e mohteram muphhlis wooks mistake mukhhlis sahib o jamal falsafa ye ke masala e gufatgu ye nahi ke mistake e spail kitne
asal dar masla e takrir o gujista to thi ye ke
jubaan e nukta na gumrah karo
chalo jis rah baa ima_n us raah raho
tahjib e likhat bhi ek chij hua karti hai
jane hai sagar aap kuchch ilham karo
baki karsaji aapki kabile tarif rahi
shikayat itni ke sagar ko rahne do sagar
sagar hai sagar jane matalab e kirdar sagar
jise na bast e aab n makan e saman karo
daad uncle mohteram muphhlis uuksh again mistake
mukhhlis hai aap pata hai pata hai aapka kaam bahot pasand aya jahhan ko shukriya
ahsanmand bhi hote agar apne divya k bajay hame bataya hota ...samjho ham kya keh rahe hai
achha to ab chale jahhan
asssalam mehfil
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Mukhhlis
| | Posted on Friday, November 12, 2004 - 04:08 am: | |
Jahhan don't take it ill yaar, after all I appreciate your poem but your spelling is very poor. Plz be carefull on it.
Regards
Muphhlis oooops Mukhhlis |
archana
| | Posted on Friday, November 12, 2004 - 05:57 pm: | |
yeh mukhhlis ka matlab kya hai? |
jahhan
| | Posted on Saturday, November 13, 2004 - 02:34 am: | |
ama uncle diwali ki mubarika
yaar uncle sach me batao to
ye muphhhhlish ooks mukhhlish ka matalab kiya paka rele ho
mere khiyal me muntajir e khalish hai jara batana to
abe haan sabhi aunty uncle loga kun diwali ki bhadahiya [badhaiya] lage raho yaaro dua hai ke tum sab ki jindgi o jahhan me hamesha ujale rahe [mai kiya ke riya tha sath me hamesha ek badda wala lite le ke challa karo andhera bole to no pirablem he hehe eehe eehe eh] achcha chale jahhan |
prash
| | Posted on Saturday, November 13, 2004 - 10:50 am: | |
very funny indeed........
well jahaan jo aap keh rahe hain wahi mai bhi kehna chahtaa tha,
I wish all poets a very happy prosperous diwali, may u all attain all heights, in ur life.
HAPPPY DIWALI once again
prash |
sunny
| | Posted on Monday, November 15, 2004 - 06:36 am: | |
hello doston dipawali sabko mubarakho mein kuchh likh raha hoon diwali ke ik raat baad ke haal
abhi tak jhilmila rahi thhi thhi battiyan
darwaze se jhalar abhhi utari nahin thhi maine
diwali ke kuchh bache hue patakhe bacche jala rahe thhe
kitna shor hungama thha kal aaj jaise doli uth gayee thhi
Dhuaen si ghira thha kal har manzar charo taraf
aaj dekho jaise saara kahin beth gaya thha |
sunny
| | Posted on Monday, November 15, 2004 - 06:55 am: | |
kyon itna shor macha raha hai yeh samundar
kisse minte kar raha hai baar baar paani ke andar
takra takra kar pathron se kyon apna sar phodta hai
jaane kaun kaun si lehren jodta hai
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Junglee
| | Posted on Monday, November 15, 2004 - 07:09 am: | |
Sunny jee aapke sheir par tippnai karne ki aagyaa chahunga
kyon itna shor macha raha hai yeh samundar
kisse minte kar raha hai baar baar paani ke andar
Aapke dwara kaha gaya ye samajh nahin aaya, smunder shor nahin macahata balki log kahte aaj samundar mein toofan aanewala hai, samundar ki lehrein shor macha rahin hain, samundar ka pani aaj bahut shant hai etc...
takra takra kar pathron se kyon apna sar phodta hai
jaane kaun kaun si lehren jodta hai
samundar ka pani pattharon se takrakar apna sar nahin nahin phorta balki balki girkar sambhalne ka sabaq deta hai insano ko, woh takrat phir peeche jata hai aur phir wapas aakar takrata hai. |
prash
| | Posted on Monday, November 15, 2004 - 08:04 am: | |
hi there,
well here is something new from me, hope u like this
HAPPY EID to all poets
tumhaari ankhon mein meri aarzoo jhilmilaati hai
tum jab dekhti ho to, meri ankhein muskuraati hai
yeh khamosh silsilay
bas aise hi chal pade
ma tumko khabar hui
aur naa hi hum samjhe
jabki ankhon ki shokhiyaan, saara haal sunaati hai
tum jab dekhti ho to, meri ankhein muskuraati hai
meri ankhon ke sapne
teri ankhon mein jhalke
fir har khwaab sach lagaa
ankhon ke milte milte
meri shab ko chandni yeh ankhein banaati hai
tum jab dekhti ho to, meri ankhein muskuraati hai
prash |
Divya
| | Posted on Monday, November 15, 2004 - 09:55 am: | |
Hi Prash,
A very sweet poem indeed. My small addition...
Akhiya milaate ho
Milne par sharmaate ho
Ehsaas kuch hone par
Palkhein jhukaate ho
Sharam se jhuki palkhein chippi bhed bataati hai
Tum jab dekhte ho to meri ankhein muskuraati hai
Door hokar bhi paas ho
Dhadkano ki aas ho
Kaise bataayein hum
Mereliye tum kitne khaas ho
Aankhein in tasveer mein asha pyar ki jagaati hai
Tum jab dekhte ho to meri ankhein muskuraati hai
Divya |
sagar vishvaraj
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 16, 2004 - 02:02 am: | |
ahwan
gahan sangharsh ke prateek chinh}
liye hue swarnim aabhaa
jab chamakte hai
kisi maanaw k mathe par
ugra vicharo k prateek chinh
lagaaye sampoorn k pariwartan ki aas
jab prakhar hote hai
kisi kraanti dut k maathe par
pawitraa aasthaa k kaantimayi dut
jab arudh hote hai
paraakastha ke sinhaasan par
jab prem shaanti,unnati,aur ullaas ka was hotaa hai
jab pawitra, sampoorn,uchit pratidaan hotaa hai
jab prem samarth ,ananya,aasthaawan, hotaa hai
tab han tab
nav jiwan ka aahwaan hotaa hai
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 16, 2004 - 03:02 am: | |
Prash,
bahut pyara likha hai aapne..
regards,
NK |
sunny
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 16, 2004 - 06:47 am: | |
jadon ki ek surkh dhundhali raat ko behta hai kohra
vaisal-e-yaar ke tasavur ki thand saare badan mein rondh jaati hai
sukh chuke hain aasun mom ban ke jab tapke thhe
foonk maar ke mohabbat lau tumne bhuja de thhi |
Junglee
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 16, 2004 - 07:37 am: | |
Ehsaas ki ye bhi ranginiyan hain
Pardes mein jo deti unki chitthiyan hain
Jiski kami hoti hai ku ba ku mahsoos
Mere yaar ki woh shokhiyaan hain |
darshi
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 16, 2004 - 11:18 pm: | |
saath chal rahe the hum unke ....
wo kitni saadat ke din the..
rifaqat thi aziz ki .....
wo kitni kurbat ke din thee.
aaj bhi jab wo din yaad aateen hain....
behate hain aasoon....
furkat ka ehsaas chod jaatein hai.... |
jahhan
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 01:05 am: | |
ahsase sagar ko faqat harjaai mile
har lehar sagar k chot khaye mile
jis tassawur e sahil me safar sare kiye
wahi sahil mile jab to paarsaai mile
ishk sagar se khade sahil to hajjar mile
jo bhi the sare khufo khar k sataye mile
wajud e sagar ko bhi ek sath mile
be milawat sada dil chand ehsaas mile |
prash
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 05:02 am: | |
hi there,
well u all writers are really spreading fragrance of feeling here, thanks for that and please keep continue.......
here a latest from me, and as always i would like to appreciate ur additions in this.
so waiting eagerly
mere dil mein yeh kaun aaya hai
jiski aahtein goonjti hai
kyon mai khush aaj hoon, kya fasaana hai yeh
meri muskuraahatein poochhti hain
dhoop mein aaj zyaada chamak hai
aur hawaaon mein shaamil khanak hai
yeh fizaa aaj kyon surmai hai
meri muskuraahatein poochhti hain
usko shikwaa bhi hai aur shikayat bhi hai
fir bhi uski mujh pe inaayat bhi hai
kya koi ladki aise bhi roothhti hai
meri muskuraahatein poochhti hain
ek nazar mein hi mujhko chunaa tha
un aankhon ko kehte sunaa tha
ye khushi har taraf goonjti hai
meri muskuraahatein poochhti hain
prash
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sunny
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 06:43 am: | |
yun udaas udaas din jaaga
jal jal ke aaftaab bhhi jaise oob gaya thha
koi taazgi koi mannat nahin zamane se
nikal ghar se bina kisi bahane ke
tapak raha thha dhundhala zara manzar
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 06:49 am: | |
buno ek bar phir naya sapna
sang sabhi ke ho koi to apna
suna sakein apne dil ka haal
pata nahin yeh pal rahe na rahe
NK |
Divya
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 07:10 am: | |
Prash,
A possible reply to some lines in your poem...
Rootthna toh ek bahaana hai
Aise hi toh paas mein aana hai
Kyoun na rootthe tumse hum
Ek ankahi ehsaas jo tumhe dilaana hai...
Divya
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Junglee
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 07:32 am: | |
Tum ye kaisa chaahti EHSAAS ho
Ki keede paden muyee SAAS ko
Kiya tumhari saas tumhaien satati hai
Kiya har waqt chahti khatir baans ho
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jahhan
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 10:17 am: | |
ishk me tere har had se gujar jana chahta hun
log jite hai ashiki me mai teri chaht me mar jana chahta hun
ai mere yaar na samjha hai na samjhega tu sagar ka naseeb
log pane ke liye jite hai mai tujhe kho ke jina chahta hun
yaad karegi tu mujhe jitna utna hi mujhe yaad ayegi
yaad aau na tujhe mai mai tujhko bhul jana chahta hun |
Junglee
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 11:15 am: | |
Wah Jahhan bahut khub, kiya likha hai, koi aur mil gaya kiya ya dil tuut gaya.
Log bhi kiya kiya khwahishein karte hain Ishq mein
Zinda rah nahin payenge lekin de rahe hain Qurbaniyan Ishq mein
Shayed koi qabil nahin apne mahboob ke
Uski khushi kiya hai ye bhi sochna padta hai Ishq mein |
Junglee
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 11:28 am: | |
"Ehsaas" ye eik aisa topic hai ki jisper jitna likha jaye kam hai, Insaan apni zindagi mein kai tarah ke ehsasat se guzarta hai lekin usko itni khubsurti se bayan har koi nahin kar sakta hai jaisa Prash, Divya, Sunny, Nishant, Arpita, True One, Archana, Jahhan, Bg, Himanshu aur Ghayal (jee common hai) ne kiya hai. Bahut khuub. Aap sabhi logon se meri vinti hai ki likhiye aur khuub likhiye.
Bhai mera naam aap log likh dena.. |
arpita
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 02:25 pm: | |
yeh afsaane yeh haal-e-biyaan aur yeh kahaaniyaan
shikwaa kyoon kar rahi hain yeh meri parchayiyaan
muhobbat to karte hain saare lekin mujhe hi kyoon milli russwayiyaan
kyoon kehte hain log pyaar mein deni hotti hai qurbaaniyaan
kya hai ehsaas tumhe ki hum tumhe kitna chaahte hain
kya kahein hai ittni muhobbat ke hum roz bin aag jallte hain
saagar mein bhi paani kam hogaa jitne hum aasoon bahaate hain
aisa kuch kiya hai tumne jaise log paani mein jaal bichaate hain
-Arpita |
sunny
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 17, 2004 - 11:28 pm: | |
arpita itna naaraz mat ho itna dukhi mat ho sab thik ho jayega
kahaniyan tumhari ban jayengi misaal ik din
parchiyan tumhare isque ki hongi bahhal ik din
ruswaiyan nahin imtihaan hai tumhara
zamane ko dikha do kya honsla hai tumhara
chahat kitni hai kissi si lawson mein kaise karen bayan
raat ke taren ginne ke liye jaagte rehte hain bas
jal jal ke aag bhhi bujh gayee jala naa payee isque-e-tilism ko
paani kya baha le jayega meri muhobbat ke jism ko
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sunny
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 04:17 am: | |
basta phenk ke lochi bhaga roshan arra bagh ko jane ko
chillata chal guddi chal pakke jamun tapkenge
aangan ki rassi se maa ne kapde khole aur tandur pe laa ke tin ki chadar daali
saare din ke sukhe papad lachi mein liptai chadar bach gayee rabba kiya karaya dhul jaana thha
gaeru ne khaet ki sukhi matti churiyon waale haath mein le kar bheegi bheegi aankhon se upar dekha
jhoom ke phir uthe hain baadal tut ke phir meh barsega
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arpita
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 07:52 am: | |
Sunny, this is for you...
ek aas si dil mein jagaane ki koshish ki hai tumne
ek chiraag andhere mein jalaane ki koshish ki hai tumne
shukriyaa adaa karte hain tumharaa
toote huye taare ko jorrne ki koshish ki hai tumne
-Arpita |
jahhan
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 08:50 am: | |
junglee bhaiya kahe kante chubha rele ho aaj kal jahhan waise hi bhot dukhi ho rele tum kahe ko jala rele
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 08:57 am: | |
kahin door ek taara toota
sapnon ka ek sahara chhuta
aankhon mein barkha chhayi
duniya ne ki hamse ruswai
andhiyaron ka pada basera
aandhiyon ne bahut peeta
kisi roshni ki chahat mein
aankhon ne naya sapna dekha
NK
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JAHHAN
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 09:40 am: | |
aapke liye N.K.
door gagan me tara tuta
sapno ka ek sahara tuta
ankho me badra chhayi
duniya ne ki ruswai
pada hua ghanghor andhera
ujiyare ne mukh hai fera
ujiyare ki chahat[YA KHOJ] me
ankho ne fir sapna dekha
DONT MIND N.K. JUST TRYING TO MAKE IT NATURLE
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Divya
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 09:53 am: | |
Hi Prash,
One of the many imaginations,concept that could be a part of Ehsaas...hope you like it...
San-gopan suraj susum badra ke aanchal se
Takta hai anmol ambar ko chup-chup ke
Dekho toh aise in tikshan kiranon se
Arunaii subah lajjit hui kaise
Pushpon se jab lal-chamak os parte hai
Sura bhari hont humein jaise choomtein hai
Anima nivas raha dekho kaise in boondon mein
Jo ek div.y achambh sa nashaa humein deti hai
Divya |
prash
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 01:36 pm: | |
HI DIVYA
,well both of ur additions to ehsaas are marvellous as always, The great use of Hindi really fills lot of purity and blows kool air of fesh feelings, really u r such a great writer and have great command over hindi, please keep fragrancing.
ARPITA...
well i first read ur lines and later read reply from SUNNY, its really wonderful to see so fit his reply is. It seems that those two poetries (ur and reply by sunny)were written with same kind of feeling.
NIshant as always ur lines are meaningful too, i dont't need to mention.
&&&& the way junglee has admired all writers here that's too inspiring, JAHAAN u r good too and this is natural that we try and correct each other, as far as I know nishant and other writers no body will mind to accept suggestions.
Finally i am thankful to all u great people please continue........i will add some thing soon.
take care
prash |
prash
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 01:49 pm: | |
hi there,
hope u like this concept and i will look for ur additions corrections and suggestions......
dil pe mere dastak dene
dil ko mere apna kehne
yeh kaun aaya hai
leke zindagi ke sapne
mujhko meri qismat se sirf tanhaai mili
har bhalaai ke badle mujhko rusvaai milee
aarzoo thi zindagi se aage aage chalne ki
lekin dhoop aisi thi ki muijhko parchaaii milee
dhoop mein saaya bharne
aur saaye mein rang bharne
yeh kaun aaya hai
leke zindagi ke sapne
mere pyar ko nahi ab tak kisi ka pyar milaa
jaane kyon bante hi, toot gayaa har silsilaa
arzoo thi zindagi ko chaman banaane kii
maine koshish bahut ki par, ek bhi gul na khilaa
khwaab fir se dikhlaane
khwaab mere sach karwaane
yeh kaun aaya hai
leke zindagi ke sapne
prash
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 10:59 pm: | |
Jahhan ji,
bahut shukriya hamein correct karne ka.Bilkul..agar aapko lage ki aur accha ya natural banaya ja sakta hai..to jaroor batayien.
Hi Prash,
yeh aapki bahut badi khubi hai ki aap sabko appreciate karte hain..mere lkhe hue par aapka apprecialtion pana ..sach mein accha lagta hai.
abhi main kuch jyada nahin likh pa raha hun..kuch busy bhi hun..samay milte hi likhunga..
aur waise bhi aap jaise logon ke beech kaun nahin likhna chahega..
NK |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 11:07 pm: | |
samundar ki lehron sa ek ehsaas
jaise sukhi mitti ki badhti pyas
teri payaliya chhan-chhan shor machaye
jaise ghunghat utthaye gori sharmaye
amavasya ke baad ka woh poora chaand
jaise subah ke dhoop ki sunahari kiran
itna pyaara hai tera "ehsaas"..
NK |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Thursday, November 18, 2004 - 11:10 pm: | |
Prash,
ek baat abhi abhi dhyan aayi..so likh raha hun..is page pe post karne mein ek apnapan sa lagta hai..is liye sabse pehle is page par hi aata hun..bas itna hi kehna tha..
NK |
JAHHAN
| | Posted on Friday, November 19, 2004 - 01:38 am: | |
thik kaha N.K. sachmuch lagta hai likh nahi apno se bate kar rahe ho...well...achcha lagta hai ...
N.K. and Prash kuchh real feelings likh raha hun
waqt badla magar na badla itni bhi
jitni badli hai nigahe sab ki
daure khijra me bhi na ayi kamtari ahwal sagar me
kyu ho gayi hai kamtar nigahe sab ki
gardish e daur aye ,gaye aur ayenge abhi
faqat ek daur me hi badal gayi hai nigahe sabki
jiske kirdar ne misaal kayi kayam kiye
usi sagar se chhup rahi hai nigahe sab ki
jhele tufaa aur waqt ki maar na hui kam junu o aqidat sagar
jane kyu kam ho gayi hai nigahe sabki
danai e duniya bhi kya chij na samjh paye
hall e duniya ye magar dekh k jhuk gayi hai nigahe ham ki
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Ta Ta Thaiya
| | Posted on Friday, November 19, 2004 - 04:52 am: | |
Kamsin hun abhi par koi bhi EHSAAS nahin hai
Sach bolti hoon lekin karta koi wishwas nahin hai
Bahut mushkil hai badalna zamane ki rivayet
Jhagadti hun pati se kiyunki ghar mein koi saas nahin hai |
sunny
| | Posted on Friday, November 19, 2004 - 07:56 am: | |
arre bhai yahan toh achcha carvan chal raha hai. Arpita tumne toh nenle pe dehla maara mere jawab pe jawab chaliye ik aur lo jawab dena ab sab mil ke naa bhhi do kya hai koi dantega nahin
saari saari raat jaag kar kyon tumhey sote hue takta hai chand
aaftaab bhhi jagata hia saher ko tumhare chehra dekhne ke baad
nadi ke aab mein jab haath ferati ho tum kyon bhatak jaati hai raste se
magrur sagar bhhi bhool jaata hai payaab-e-aab apni jab se dekha teri aankhon ko
jhadte paate kaise haste hue baraste hain jab jhulti ho tum gulshan mein
boonde baarish ki bajati hai koi saaz naya jab bajti hai payal teri raqs-e-badan mein
machal gayyee kalam shayeron ki jab dekha tera tilism-e-husn
rangon se saja diya aasmaan hawa fiza ne jab lehra ke udda tera aanchal-e-sukoon
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sunny
| | Posted on Friday, November 19, 2004 - 08:13 am: | |
maa ne sanduk se kuchh bistar nikale aur aangan mein dhoop mein daal diya
shaam ko angithi mein kachchi moongfali namak mein bhun ke chai ke saath diye
aaftaab ki dhoop ab sajne lagi hai
saher-e-shab ab thand lagne lagi hai
bebe aangan mein takhat par bethe khushk khushk hathon pareon par sarson kaa tel lagaya
zara almaari se meri silayian diyo aawaz de kar mujhe bulaya |
arpita
| | Posted on Friday, November 19, 2004 - 10:28 am: | |
Sunny, kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....
saari saari raat jaag kar chaandi churaane aata hai yeh chaand
tabhi to din ki roshni mein mujhse chup jaata hai yeh chaand
shayd meri aankhon mein aansoo nahin dekh sakta yeh chaand
tabhi to meri band aankhen roz nihaarta hai yeh chaand
shayad taaron ki zubaani meri kahaaniyaan sunnta hai yeh chaand
tabhi to taaron ko sang le kar aata hai yeh chaand
shayad mere pyaar ko samajhne ki koshish karta hai yeh chaand
tabhi to saari raat jagmagaata hai yeh chaand
shayad suraj ko paane ki koshish karta hai yeh chaand
tabhi to har baar ek nayaa daag paata hai yeh chaand
-Arpita |
ahsaas
| | Posted on Friday, November 19, 2004 - 11:39 am: | |
bahut khoob likha hai aap sub ne. In particular, contributions by Divya, Arpita, Prash, Sunny, Jahaan are wonderful..
keep it up guys.. ek naya saathi..
ehsaas hota hai ki "main huun" magar kabhi kabhi
zindgi varna toh bahe jaati hai duusron ke liye
"ahsaas" |
JAHHAN
| | Posted on Saturday, November 20, 2004 - 03:56 am: | |
saari saari raat jag kar chandni lootane ata hai ye chand
tabhi to suraj ke ane se ghar ko laut jata hai ye chand
samjhata hai apni bebashi aur tumhare dukh ko
bas isi liye to chup chap apne ujle hatho se sahlata hai ye chand
sunta hai samjhta hai tumhare gam aur tanhai ko
tabhi to sath apne taro ko tumhara sathi banata hai ye chand
chand ko chand banata hai ye pyar chand ki haqiqat samjhata hai ye pyar
tabhi to sari raat pyar ki raushani me jagmgata hai ye chand
chand ki jindgi mehaj ek tayshuda safar na kuchh khota na pata hai ye chand
yaar samjha karo rojj paidal chalte takrate badlo se ghhiss jata hai ye chand
ha ahaha ahha aaha ahaha ahah aha ah well said arpita lo chale jahhan
mehfil asssalam
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sunny
| | Posted on Saturday, November 20, 2004 - 06:54 am: | |
koshish ki hai aapne aur kya khoob ki hai aapne
Waise ab chand ko bahut nikhaar liya alfazon se kissi aur ke paas chale ab chaliye mein hi aaghaaz karta hoon
chasm-e-bazeecha shuru hua dheere dheere
main nazre phiraun toh palke utha ke mujhe dekhti hai
baar baar lehrati hai dupatta apna kabhi sawri hui zulfe sawarti hai
ungliyan dabaye ungliyon mein khamosh nigaho ke isharon se chidati hai
hum bhhi kuchh kam nahin saheli ki uski de rahe thhe tavajo itna
chid chid ke adh khule honton se galiyan bhhi barsati hai
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sunny
| | Posted on Saturday, November 20, 2004 - 07:07 am: | |
bas ik hi sur mein ik hi leh mein subah se dekh dekh kaise barasta hai udaas paani
dawar ke malmali dupatte se beh rahe thhe tamam mausam yapak raha thha
palak palak ris rahi thhi yeh kayenaat saari
har ik shae bheeg bheeg ke kaisi bajhal si ho gayee hai
deemag ki gilli gilli sochon se bheegi bheegi udaas yadein tapak rahi thhi
kitni makhluq hai hungame hain aawase hain
phir bhhi ehsaas ka sabz hai hole hole jiase chupp chaap barasta hai tasavur tera |
Divya
| | Posted on Saturday, November 20, 2004 - 09:37 am: | |
Prash,
Yeh aapka badappan hai jo itna samman detein hai sabko....aur sach kahoon toh hum koi writer nahi hai....aapke kavitaon ko pad kar unse humari koshishon ko judne ki pyartna kartein hai. Bas aapke kavitaon ko padhne ke liye aatein hai aur aapki har rachna humein bahut khoobsurat lagtin hai. Hum toh aapke bahut saare fans mein se ek hain.
Bas aise hi ek kalpana likh rahi hoon...
Jab paas aane lage ho
Peeche chalne lage kaddam
Chodo...nah yu.n abh chedo
Aane lagi humein sharam
Humse kuch naa maango
Kyoun sataate ho balam
Aur kareeb naa aao
Dekho...dekho...kehte hai hum
Yeh kaisi zidd karte ho
Abh jao bhi...jao sajan
Aankhon se naa phuslao
Pighalne lage hai hum
Divya |
Divya
| | Posted on Saturday, November 20, 2004 - 09:47 am: | |
Prash,
Aur ek baat kehna hi bhool gayi...aapko EhsaaS ki kaamyaabi bahut, bahut mubarakho. Aapko hamesha jeevan ke har mod par safalta milein... yehi humari pratana hai Ishwar se!
Divya |
sunny
| | Posted on Sunday, November 21, 2004 - 08:05 am: | |
kya haal hai doston divya bade dino baad yahan aana hua
chand ki kuchh tapakti boonde
zameen ko aa kar is kadar chume
reh reh kar kali raat bhhi jagti hai
aaye kya saher dekh ke phir so jaati hai
dhuaem mein ghoomta hai sannata aise
sarakta hai saanp khali khamdaron mein jaise
khada hai darwaaze pa koi shama haath mein liye hua
aaj bhhi yakin hai usko bhatakta hua andhera kabhi toh aayega is rodhni ki taraf
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sunny
| | Posted on Sunday, November 21, 2004 - 08:17 am: | |
kehrata hua nikla aaj chand bhi jaise
chubh gaya thha koi taara uske bhhi paon mein
baadal ki roni surat bhhi dekh li maine
mujhe toh taras naa aaya main bhhi toh ra raha thaa
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Nishant Kumar
| | Posted on Sunday, November 21, 2004 - 10:27 am: | |
hello friends,
bas ab aapse izazat chaunga..
ab main koi post nahin karunga..
aaplogon ke beech rehna bahut accha laga..
bahut kuch sikha maine..
aaj kuch karnon se mujhe ebazm se jaana par raha hai..
dekhiye..kabhi koi din aaya ..to main jarooor wapas likhne aaunga..
Prash,Divya,archana,Sunny...chalta hun..aap log yun hin likhte rahiyega....
NK |
sunny
| | Posted on Monday, November 22, 2004 - 06:50 am: | |
tera tasavur khilta hia aise
jaise kohre mein lipti jadon ki ik surkh subah
gir jaate kabhi chalte chalte
Toh chot mein jalan jayada hoti
NK kahan jaa raho ho bhai kabhi toh net pe bethoge bhule bhatake aa jana kabhi aisa toh nahin ki kahin aana hota haiiske liye Just a click away |
jahhan
| | Posted on Monday, November 22, 2004 - 07:41 am: | |
kya baat hai is jahhan ko to log bhul hi gaye
kyu be mehfil fir panga loon kya ......chhodo just jocking yaro .....maja aa raha hai chalo likhta hun kuchh.........
nahi hai kuchh to baki kuchh wahi mera
raushani meri nahi n sahi mera hai andhera
jahhan ko nahi jagah agar is jahhan me na sahi
jahhan ko naani jagah agar asman me na sahi
dil me hai jahhan jagah wahi mera mera basera
gahraio e samander me rahta hai ek sakhs jo yaar mera
nahi saiddai mai suraj ka rahne do chand mera
raat meri hai rahegi meri tu le lo sawera
yaar aaj kal kuchh udas rahta hun dunia me jahhan k sath dene wale sare hi jane kaha kho gaye koi muskurata hua pangebaaj jis k ankhe masumiyat se chamakti ho aur musukarahte chhalkati ho jiske juban se hansi barasati ho aur turra ye k wo khunnas baj bhi ho jid aur junu jis k mathe par chamkta ho jiske dil me khula asman basta ho aisa aasma jis pe koi daag n ho
yaar log aisa koi mile to jara kehna jahhan intejar me hai apne sathi k
thak gaye jahhan achha.......... |
prash
| | Posted on Monday, November 22, 2004 - 10:06 am: | |
hi fiends,
well aapke posts laajawaab hai par nishant ke jaane ki khabar se mai kaafi surprised hoon, Nishant agar aapko bazm mein koi bat buri lagi ho to please bataaiyegaa.
Aapke jaane ka faisalaa ofcourse aapka hai, lekin hamaara aap par itnaa to haq hai ki hum aapko jaane se rokein, aap hamaari mehfil ke bahut important part hai aapke jaane se bahut kami ho jaayegi........
so please give ur decision a secon thought.and if its necassary for u to leave us please make sure atleast a visit twice a week, weekly or if more than every fortnight,
you better make your visits less but not zero.
i hope to see your revised and positive decision soon
prash |
arpita
| | Posted on Monday, November 22, 2004 - 10:49 am: | |
Nishant:
prash ne theek kahaa hai ki ittna to haq hai humaraa tum par ki hum tumhe rok sakein....dekho meine to abhi seekhnaa shuru hi kiyaa hai tum sab se aur tum jaa rahe ho....please do change your decision...
-Arpita |
sunny
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 24, 2004 - 07:56 am: | |
koi dard koi hasi koi gham koi khushi kuchh nahin
Koi ehsaas koi hosh koi hawaz kuchh nahin
Aisa lagta hai yehi asli manzil hai sabki
kitna sukoon koi duniya daari kuchh nahin
bistar pe late lete apni rooh ke angaron ko hawa dete hue
kab bhujhegi yeh aag kab aayega maahtaab
jaise kissi se koi lagav nahin koi sawal koi jawab nahin
naa din mein naa raat mein naa khamoshi naa kissi baat mein
koi fark nahin padta ab tum kuchh bhhi kaho mujhe
waada kiya hai usne ab le ke jayega mujhe
Hello doston kya haal hai |
kashish
| | Posted on Saturday, November 27, 2004 - 12:42 am: | |
hi there,
prash kya hua i hope u r fine there,
hope to see u soon
kashish |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Monday, November 29, 2004 - 03:41 am: | |
hi friends,
i am back..
but yahan kaphi shaanti si chhayi hai..
kya baat hai..
ehsaas tumhari jhukti palkon ka
jaise kyamat pe kyamat aayi ho
ehsaas tumhare bepanaah pyar ka
jaise kismat bhi kam ho mere liye
NK
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sunny
| | Posted on Monday, November 29, 2004 - 08:51 am: | |
nishant welcome back Ehsaas mein aapka phir se isateqbal hai aur jahan tak aapki shikayat ka sawal hai toh abhhi dur kiye dete hain
Tanhai mein ghuli khamoshi ki aawas suno
chupp nahin hai woh aane waale ehsaas ka ishara deti hai
jhukte agle sire main uthte pichle sirre ko dekho
badte badte aasmaan ko chu jaata hai zameen pe paon tika ke
shor mein chupp chaap bethi us khamoshi ko dekho
khamosh nigahon se deti un sadaon ko dekho
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prash
| | Posted on Monday, November 29, 2004 - 09:15 am: | |
hi friends, thanks kashish for ur message, i am here hope u like this....
here is a couplet, i couldn't explore it, so left for u, to complete.....
yeh kya khayaal hai, yeh kya khaamoshi hai
koi to baat hai, jo hothon mein dabee hai
see u soon
prash |
arpita
| | Posted on Monday, November 29, 2004 - 09:55 am: | |
yeh khaamoshi kuch keh rahi hai
jaise ghoongat mein dulhun sharmaa rahi hai
jaise khulli aankhon se koi sapna dekh rahi hai
jaise kissi ke aane kaa intzaar kar rahi hai
-Arpita |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Monday, November 29, 2004 - 10:54 am: | |
Arpita,
few lines on your lines above..
yeh pal kuch keh raha hai
khaabon ka carvan aa raha hai
sitaron se saja koi itraa raha hai
dekha to koi doli mein sharma raha hai
NK |
prash
| | Posted on Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 09:52 am: | |
hi there,
thanks arpita and nishant for ur additions, here is something from me in addition...
hope u like this
yeh kya khayaal hai, yeh kya khaamoshi hai
koi to baat hai, jo hothon mein dabee hai
manzilein paa lene ki koi aarzoo na thi
humsafar tum ho to yeh raah hi bhalee hai
Faqat hothon se iqraar hi baaki rahaa hai
bas pyar ki pehle aur aakhri yeh rasm hi bachee hai
mujhe yakien hai ek din wo mujhse keh lenge
wo baat jo unke hothon par sharm mein lipti hai
is intzaar mein bhi musafir kuchh ajab lutf hai
yeh wo raaz hai jo zaahir bhi hai, nahi bhi hai
prash
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Divya
| | Posted on Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 05:25 am: | |
Prash,
Khoob likha hai aapne...
"mujhe yakien hai ek din wo mujhse keh lenge
wo baat jo unke hothon par sharm mein lipti hai" Is pe...
Woh jo bhi hai,
Khush naseeb hai
Magar woh baat jo honton mein dabee hai
Shaayad wahi baat unhe bhi tumse sun.ni hai??
Intazaar mein kahi woh nikal na jaaye
Woh baat kahi adhoori na rah jaaye
Yeh dil ki baat hi kuch aisi hoti hai
Kehne se hi uski mehatva badti hai...
Jab mehsoos kiya hai pyaar unse
Toh keh do dil ki baat unse
Naa ruko aur, kehdo woh baat
Phir dekho paaoge jeevan bhar ka saath
All the best!
Divya |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 05:43 am: | |
hi prash,divya..
I have tried few lines on same lines as above..plz do add ur comments..
chahe juban se naa kaho
par palkein jo jhukati ho
pyar humse kaise chipaogi
chahe humse nazrein churao
par dil to dharakta hi hai
dharkan ki awaz kaise chipaogi
chahe humse milne na aao
par kadmon ko kaise rok paogi
hamare paas chali hi aaogi
chahe akele yun aahein bharogi
par mile bina reh bhi nahi paogi?
hamari yaad qyamat tak jaroor aaegi..
NK |
Divya
| | Posted on Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 07:13 am: | |
Nishant,
Bahut hi pyaara hai aapki rachna...humne isme thodi si ched chaad ki hai...asha hai aapko accha lage...
Chahe juban se naa kaho
Par palkhein jo jhukati ho
Khamosh mein lipti
Har bhed bataati ho
Chahe humse naazrein churao
Par dil dhadakta hai kyoun kaho
Dhadkano ki awaazein kaise
Chupaaoge humse kaho?!
Chahe humse milne na aao
Kaise rokoge kadmon ko
Tumhari bas ki baat hoti
Humare paas na chali aati
Chahe akele yun aahein bharogi
Par mile bina reh bi naa paaogi
Is pyaar mein hai itni shakti ke
Qayamat tak sirf meri hi rahogi
Divya |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 10:45 am: | |
Divya bahut shukriya aapka..accha laga padh kar..
kuch aur add kar raha hun ..jo pehle samay ki kami se nahin likh paya tha..
chahe hum tumse kabhi mile na hon
par yaad to hamari aati hi hogi
pass se tum kabhi gujre to hoge..
chahe hum bin muskurate hoge
kabhi to pal tumhe rulata hi hoga
hamari yaad tumhe tadpati hi hogi..
shayad tumne mujhe nahi dekha hoga
mannatein to tum bhi maangti hi hogi
chaandni raaton mein chhat pe jaati hi hogi
shayad hamari kami kabhi na bhi lage
par kisi unjaane ki chahat to tadpati hi hogi
woh kaun hai kahan hai yeh paheli suljhati hi hogi
NK
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 10:53 am: | |
aasman mein chaand ke sang taare hain
tum hi batao tumhare bina hum kya hain
zindagi pyar ka ek madhur ehsaas hai
tumhari chahat hamari zindagi ki talaash hai
awaz ke sang to kai sur hain
tum bin hum bahut tarse hain
NK
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sunny
| | Posted on Thursday, December 02, 2004 - 06:18 am: | |
Neend mein dekha aankon mein ik khawab betha hai
Chota sa dubak ke kone mein chup chaap betha hai
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Jhakki
| | Posted on Thursday, December 02, 2004 - 06:32 am: | |
Usne shahar se laya mere liye lota hai
Haye main kiya karun mera dil usper tota hai
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jahhan
| | Posted on Friday, December 03, 2004 - 12:53 am: | |
aaj aye fir maihane me sagar
aaj pani bhi jaam ho jaye
hai hasarat ho maikashi kuchh aise
jo piye sagar
us ek jaam me umr e sagar tamam ho jaye |
jahhan
| | Posted on Friday, December 03, 2004 - 12:54 am: | |
aaj aye fir maikhane me sagar
aaj pani bhi jaam ho jaye
hai hasarat ho maikashi kuchh aise
jo piye sagar
us ek jaam me umr e sagar tamam ho jaye |
Mrinal
| | Posted on Friday, December 03, 2004 - 04:23 am: | |
ek ehsaas
saari duniya kii mujhe parwaah na thii kabhii
ek bas tuu thaa,aaj tu bhii mujh se khafaa ho baithaa
mai ne jo patthar tarasaa thaa vo khudaa ho baithaa
iss mehfill-e duniya mei koi aaj phir akela pine baithaa
Mrinal
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sunny
| | Posted on Friday, December 03, 2004 - 08:01 am: | |
sehmi sehmi si saansein rooh bhhi hai haeraan
sharir ne farmaan jaari kiya hai ab khali kar do makaan
Kehte hain honsla rakho meri baaton kaa
apne hi khoon ne keh diya main toh hoon chand dino ka mehmaan |
kashish verma
| | Posted on Sunday, December 05, 2004 - 02:23 am: | |
i liked this from a movie, sung by udit narayan
khoobsurat hai wo itna, sahaa nahi jata
kaise hum khud ko rok lein, rahaa nahi jata
chand mein daag hai yeh jaante hai hum lekin
raat bhar dekhe bina usko bhi rahaa nahi jata
kashish |
prash
| | Posted on Sunday, December 05, 2004 - 08:00 am: | |
thanks jhaki mrinal, for adding ur words here, and all existing members.
here is latest from me, i have also posted the same on nishant's page.......
apna bhi kisi nasheman mein ashiyaan hota
maine jo nahi kahaa, gar tumne wo samjhaa hota
jab tanhaai mein ghamo ki fehrist dekhtaa hoon
sochtaa hoon kaash maine ishq na kiyaa hota
ab toofan bhi mujh par jaise taras khaatey hain
ghum milte rahte to bhi kuchh to hauslaa hota
hauslaa to thaa bahut ishq mein mitt jaane ka
tumne apne pyar ka vaasta to diyaa hotaa
prash
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kashish
| | Posted on Monday, December 06, 2004 - 10:59 am: | |
hey prash, u didn't comment about my lines.................kashish |
arpita
| | Posted on Monday, December 06, 2004 - 11:16 am: | |
mein punjabi ke ek shayer ki kuch lines likh rahi hoon...mujhe bohut pasand hain ...
to sochaa aap sab ke saath share karoon yeh lines
maye ni maye mein ikk shikraa(ek panchee) yaar banayaa
ohdey sir te kalgi te ohdey paireeN jhanjar
te ni oh choag chugainda ayea.
ikk ohdey roop di dhup takheri, dooja mehkaN da tirhayea.
teeja ohda rung gulabi, kisey gori maaN da jayea.
ishke da ikk palang(bed) nawari, asiN chananiaN vich daiyea.
tan di chaadar ho gai mailee uss pair aaN palangey payea.
dukhan mere naina de koye(eye lids) vich haRh hanjuaN da ayea.
saari raat gai vich sochaN uss ihh ki kehar kamayea.
choori kuttaN te oh khanda naahi, assaN dill da maas khawayea.
ikk udaari uss aisi maari, oh muRh watani na ayeaa.
-Arpita |
prash
| | Posted on Thursday, December 09, 2004 - 09:55 am: | |
thanks arpita for adding punjabi colors to this page, Sunny was the one who was doing this earlier,
anyways here is latest from me, hope will be liked. I am actually busy with my exams till 12 dec, i will be more frequent after this, till then please keep adding ur self, and also let me know when do u feel to stop this particular thread to start new, sunny nishant kashish, arpita, divya, jahaan....please suggest me, when should we switch from this to new one...
take care,
chandni se chamakti in raahon mein
unche darakhton ki narm chhanv mein
bas tumko is tarhaa se sochtaa hoon mai
jaise tum shamil ho, meri in nigaahon mein
sab kuchh bhalaa bhalaa sa hai
yaa sab kuchh badlaa sa hai
yeh dhoop zyada chamkeeli hai
yaa ki sona pighlaa sa hai
yeh sab kuchh kya tumse hai
hosh jo mere gum se hai
yeh nashaa sa mujhko kyon hai
koi poochhe to kya bataaoon mai
kya sach mein tum shamil ho, meri in nigaahon mein
dil ke naazuk haalat hai
sab yeh naye jazbaat hai
mai to bas hairaan hoon
yeh kaunse din raat hai
yeh kya hai tumhein pataa bhi hai
yeh dorr kya tumne baandhi hai
mere kadam tumhaari raah pe hai
inhein kaise rok paaoon mai
ab to mujhe bataa do na, kya tumhi ho meri nigaahon mein
prash |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Friday, December 10, 2004 - 05:39 am: | |
Hello doston..
kyon mann vyakul hai
mujhe kiski talaash hai
kaun yahan aane wala hai
sun.ne mein kiski aahat hai
bechain kyon dharke hai dil
kyon kahe aaj aa kar tu mil
kyon sapnon mein koi aata hai
is tarah se chhain churata hai
sardiyon ki sunahari dhoop mein
chhat pe akele mann tarasta hai
raaton ko khud ko tanha paakar
jiya bahut tez dharakta hai...
plz add in your valuable comments....
NK |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Friday, December 10, 2004 - 05:42 am: | |
Prash,
aap chahein to naya page shuru kar sakte hain..ek suggestion hai..kyon na naam kuch badla jaaye..what do u say?waise agar sabhi raazi hon to ek naya naam sochte hain..phir decide karte hain..waise bhi yeh page kaphi bada ho gaya hai..
regards,
NK |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Friday, December 10, 2004 - 05:46 am: | |
Prash,
all the best and lots of luck for ur exams..
NK |
Sunny
| | Posted on Saturday, December 11, 2004 - 08:53 am: | |
Thaki thaki subah raa bhar nahin soyi jaise
Laal Sooji aankhen raat bhar roi ho jaise
aankhon mein Oas ka paani
Badan pe kohre ki chadar daali
Chali thhi kissi ufaq ke kone se
Jam rahe thhe nange haath paon saare
Koi sunne waala nahin koi sunane waal nahin
Dhuan hi dhuan nikle muh se jab woh kahare
Namaskar dodton maine kuchh likha hia kuchh comments aap sab ke parash aapki likhawat ka kya kahen shabad nahin milte
Aap koi nayee thread shuru kariye hum toh hain hi humari fikr naa karen hum toh aapke saath hain hi
Parash maine yaar punjagi kab likhi mujhe toh yaad nahin ik aadi baar bahut pehle likhi thhi arpita ne achchi likhi hai waise good work
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prash
| | Posted on Monday, December 13, 2004 - 02:20 am: | |
hi there,
divya, sunny, nishant, kashish, jahaan, arpita, tamanna, mrinal jhaki and all prominent members......
Please suggest me some title for new thread, also tell should we continue with the same title EHSAAS or should we change this.
prash |
Divya
| | Posted on Monday, December 13, 2004 - 04:02 am: | |
Prash,
I think you can still continue with EhsaaS 'cause many topics come under this one roof...unless you want to dominate over a single feeling/thought that you feel the most towards or if you've got a particular concept that you wish to initiate...
Cheers,
Divya |
Hmmmmmm
| | Posted on Monday, December 13, 2004 - 04:45 am: | |
Bhai eik naya thread shuru karein jiska naam "Taarif" jismein ye condition bhi laga dein ki sirf aur sirf Taarif hi kiya jaye poetry jaisi bhi ho kiyunki Tanqeed karne par yehan ke log bhadak uthte hain.
Waise meri shubhkamnayein aap logon ke saath aur ye umeed bhi hai ki agle thread mein aaplog achch likhenge aur tanqeed bhi bardasht karenge.
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jahhan
| | Posted on Monday, December 13, 2004 - 10:17 am: | |
ha aahah ahaa ahah aha aha aha ahaahah ah
ama wah maja aa gaya yaar kya baat hai yaar ...koi to nikla sach kehna wala ...lage raho miya ....jahhan ki subhkamnaye tumhare sath hai Hmmmmmmmm |
Hihihihihi
| | Posted on Monday, December 13, 2004 - 10:28 pm: | |
o o
o l l o
o _ _ o
o o
o o
Bhai log ye koi sheir nahin hai isliye plz saraah mat dijiyega |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 14, 2004 - 03:27 am: | |
Prash,
lets change the title this time..i would suggest
"tamanna" or "aarzoo" or "darpan"..
plz think over these names...
regards,
nishant |
Divya
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 14, 2004 - 05:14 am: | |
Mere khayaal se aap jab apna thread shuroo karein toh uska naam "Tanqeed" rakh sakte hai...jisme awal number par Jahhan honge aur unke yeh unginnat roop and of course...Hmmmmmm aur Hihihihihi
Abh sirf Hahahaaa ki zaroorat hai. Ek mamuli baat par bhi tanqeed karne me awal hai aur us se bhi behtar hai aap sab ke andaz tanqueed karne ki. Kyoun aap sab kya kehte hai...
Prash....aap kya kehte hai in sab ke tanqueed ke baare mein?...mind blowing aint it?!
Divya |
Junglee
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 14, 2004 - 06:56 am: | |
Hmmmmmmmmm sb. aapka mashwira to qabile ghaur hai lekin Tanqeed ki wajah bhi koi bataye aur saath sahi mashwira bhi to kiyun bhadkega. Kuch logon ko Tanqeed pasand hai kuch logon ko nahin jo pasand karte hain unki kijiye unko raah dikhaiye. Waise maine dekha hai Divya jee Tanqeed ko bakhbi zccept karti hain aur usper unka raddeaml bhi bahut achcha hota hai. Bhai main Jungli hun agar kuch ziyada likh diya ho to plz mind mat karna.
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sunny
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 14, 2004 - 07:11 am: | |
Parash aap thread ka naam rakh sakte hain kayenaat ismein sab kuch aa jayega saari cheeze saari jazbaat saare khayalat saare ehsaas sab kuchh baaki aapki marzi
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Friday, December 17, 2004 - 07:31 am: | |
hi everyone,
main kuch din ghar bhi ho aaya aur aap logon ne abhi tak naam nahin decide kiya..common i wanna see the name..jaldi kariye.
NK |
oooooooo
| | Posted on Friday, December 17, 2004 - 08:14 am: | |
Ghar se aa gaye
tum to gaye the na aane ke liye
nahakar aa gaye
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooo
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Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Friday, December 17, 2004 - 08:33 am: | |
Mr/Ms. "oooo.."
kya aapka koi naam nahi hai?bina naam ke aisa post karne ke piche aapka maksad kya hai..yeh to main nahin jaanta..par aapke liye itna kahunga..is page par dobara agar aaiyega to naam ke saath..warna aane ki jaroorat nahin hai..
NK |
Nishant Jr
| | Posted on Friday, December 17, 2004 - 08:40 am: | |
Mera naam jo dil mein rakh lo kiyunki meri taarif kisi naam ki mohtaaj nahin hai jis naam se pukaroge chala aaunga
Jwab bhi doonga aur chal jaunga
lekin mujhe ye zaroor batana tumhein bura kiya laga..... |
Nishant
Username: Nishant
Registered: 08-2004
| | Posted on Friday, December 17, 2004 - 08:48 am: | |
Hi Nishant jr.
aapko hamari baat ka bura laga..i am sorry...aap apna naam hamse share karte hain..bada accha laga dekhkar..naam likh dene se pata chal jaata hai ki kiske bhaav hain..bas isiliye likha tha..aur mera kuch matlab nahin tha.
regards,
NK |
arpita
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 21, 2004 - 10:31 am: | |
har ehsaas mein hai naam uss aurat kaa
aab-o-havayon ko senhna hai kaam uss aurat kaa
gam ke pyaale ko pyaar se chalkaa de jo
suraj ki pehli kiran saa paigaam uss aurat ka
husn ke kshizr mein lipti huyee
zikr hota hai subeh shaam uss aurat ka
aankhon mein aansoo zubaan pe hansi
saddiyon se jalna hai jurm uss aurat kaa
har rishte ka safar tey karti hai vo
andaaza bhi nahin kya daam uss aurat ka
kiss angan ke shazar mein khill jaye kya pataa
bass yahi hai qalaam uss aurat kaa
-Arpita |
prash
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 21, 2004 - 11:09 am: | |
hi there, Arpita, nishant and nishant jr. uR creation is great as always, here is my latest creation do read and comment
since this thread is now reaching to 200 soon, we will have to start new, so i have been suggested title KAAYNAT -E- SHAAYARI. do comment on it as well, and i will be grateful if u like to suggest any new word as title.
please take care...
wo kaun hai, wo jo bhi hai badee hasien hai
usee ki daastaan sunkar saari fizaa rangeen hai
wo mere khayaalon ke darpan mein jhilmilaati hai
usee ki dee khushiyaan hai jo mere lab se muskuraati hai
wo aaj mujhse judaa hone ki baat kehti hai
jabki sach yeh hai ki ab yeh mumkin hi nahi
dil todnaa chaahe to beshaq tod de
lekin dil e dhadkan hataanaa mumkin hi nahi
wo bas utnaa kareeb aa jaayegi
koshish karke jitni wo dooriyaa badhaati hai
uske is faisle se mai hairaan to hoon
par apni qismat ke sulook se waakif hoon
yeh jo aaj hua hai , hamesha hota rahaa hai
mai apni zindagi ki is adaa se waakif hoon
pehle qismat hothon pe hasien sajaati hai
fir mujh hi pe muskuraati hai
prash |
archana
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 21, 2004 - 11:24 am: | |
aurat teri yehi kahani
ankhon mein ansoon
anchal mein pyar ki nishaani
pata nahin kahan padhi thi wahi yaad aa gayi... |
arpita
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 21, 2004 - 11:29 am: | |
bohut khoob likha hai Prash aapne....khaas karke yeh lines mujhe bohut pasand aayeen:-
"pehle qismat hothon pe hasien sajaati hai
fir mujh hi pe muskuraati hai"
mujhe to aise likhna nahin aata lekin aap sab se mujhe bohut kuch seekhne ko milla hai....aur mere khyaal mein ye topic "KAAYNAT -E- SHAAYARI" acha rahegga....jaldi se isse shurru karein taan ki mujh jaise aur log bhi kuch seekhein yahaan se....
-Arpita |
prash
| | Posted on Thursday, December 23, 2004 - 09:32 pm: | |
hi arpita and all prominent writers,
thanks for ur additions, right from the day one, i have been saying that this thread belongs to all of us, its success is to be shared by all of us and credit must be given to all here,
As we know this page has become long enough and its time to switch for new thread, so i will see you again in KAAYNAT-E-SHAAYARI.
YOUR'S TRUELY
PRASHANT SHRIVASTAVA (PRASH)
pecificcreation@yahoo.co.in |
Lalita Gaundar
| | Posted on Thursday, July 28, 2005 - 08:29 pm: | |
Bahut kuoob likha i liked it all |
prash
| | Posted on Saturday, August 20, 2005 - 07:17 am: | |
hi |
