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gauhar
| | Posted on Monday, September 12, 2005 - 08:55 am: | |
mere sabhi sahpaTHi,aadaab,
ik bahut dilchasp behr hai jisme likhna bahut mazedaar ho jaataa hai.maine pehle bhi ik koshish ki hai,aur abhi bhi karuNgi.
behr:ramal musamman makhbuun maHzuuf maqtuu
numbering: 2122 1122 1122 22 or we can use
2122 1122 1122 112
some examples:
1) baske dushwaar hai(mirza ghalib-sung by jagjit singh,mohd. rafi,etc)
2)rooh jab wajhd meiN aaye (ahmed faraz-sung by ghulam ali)etc..
assignment: ik ghazal, with atleast 4 ashaar including a matla
radiff and qafiyaa: according to your own
date :ten days,til sept 22nd.
best of luck to everyone (myself included):-)
gauhar |
Rayaz "Baghaakoli"
Username: Baghaakoli
Registered: 07-2005
| | Posted on Saturday, September 17, 2005 - 03:17 am: | |
gauhar ji, Adaab
lagta hai kuchh jyadah hi busy ho aajkal idhar to bilkul time nahiN de rahi ho
ghazal aur nazm mei.N jo firk hai uske bare mei.N mujhe thorii si jaankari mil gayee hai.
beh'r ke bare mein bhi kuchh padha hai. lekin you know practice makes a man perfect that's why i have come here. so how to start now?
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