| Author | Message | ||
     Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Dear friends main aaj aapko shaayarii ke us andaaz ke baare meN bataa rahaa huN jo bahut hii khoobsoorat aur aasaan hai...Qataa 2 she'roN ki hotii hai jismeN taknikii nukte ghazal vaale hii hote haiN yaane radiif kaafiyaa etc.. magar ismeN dono she'roN men rabt honaa zaroorii hai yaane nazm ki tarah ye ek particular topic yaa baat par based hotii hai...jaise example ke taur par merii ye chand qataa...dekhiye...! Qataa ~ 1 pehle tou mujhe kar diyaa ruswaa sar-e-mehfil phir de rahi hai ghair ko bosaa sar-e-mehfil nam ho ke jhukii haiN mirii aaNkheN ki jo dekhaa ai husn! tiraa aaj tamaashaa sar-e-mahfil >>...ismeN jo baat maine pahle she'r meN shuruu kii yaane jo samaa baaNdhaa use duusre she'r meN khatm kiyaa yaane Husn ki bevafaaii iskaa mazmooN hai..! Qataa ~ 2 chhoR ke mujhko na jaane kiskii vo furqat meN hai kal mujhe luutaa thaa jisne aaj vo gurbat meN hai hai nazar qudrat kii har insaan ke aamaal par jaise ko taisaa dikhaane kaa hunar qudrat meN hai >...ismeN bhii vahii baat yaane kal jo luuT ke ameer huaa aaj gariib huaa kyuN ke jaise ko taisaa dikhaanaa qudrat ko aataa hai..! Qataa ~ 3 laauuNgaa taab-e-gham maiN kahaaN se bataa ai! dil phir yaad kar ke usko mujhe mat sataa ai! dil vo ek khwaab thaa jo haqiiqat na ban sakaa meraa kahaa tuu maan use bhool jaa ai! dil >>...ismeN maine apne dil ko kuchh kahaa hai aur samjhaayaa hai yaane ek hii baat ko samjhaayaa hai ke yaar ko bhool jaa...! ----Maine ye assignment isliye chunaa ke gauhar aur rooh dono ne qataa ke baare meN mujhse poochhaa thaa------ to aap sabko kam se kam 2 qataa pesh karnii hai aur haaN qataa maiN matlaa ho yaa na ho koii farq nahiiN paDhtaa...! ------------------------------------------------ aaj 24 taariikh hai mujhe isii mahiine ki 31 taariikh se pahle aap sabke assignment mil jaane chaahiye is baar marking nahiiN hogii grade mileNge..! aap sabkaa chhoTaa sa dost Suhel | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Ek baat maiN likhnaa bhool gayaa aap logo ke dono qataa alag-alag bah'r meN likhni hai..! 1. Bah’r Hazaj Saalim (1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2) Song_1: lage haiN shamma pe pahre zamaane ki nighaahoN ke... Fim: Do Badan Song_2: kisii patthar ki muurat se muhabbat kaa iraadaa hai Film: Hamraaz 2. Bah’r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf (1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2) Song_1: hameN tumse muhabbat ho gayii hai...ye duniyaa khoobsoorat ho gayii hai Film: Border Suhel | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Ek correction dekh leN 2. Bah’r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf (1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2) | ||
| silent_rooh |
Suhel iss bahr mein ek qitaa likhaa hai wo post kar rahii hun..this is for the first time in life that i m trying to write a qitaa..so i m confused..iss se dekh kar bataao ki m i moving in right direction... Bah’r Hazaj Saalim 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 husn kaa wo hai par waanaa na mil uss se tujhe degaa na wo chaahat na mil uss se hai aaraaish talab wo bulhawas yaawar na degaa wo tawajjo tu na mil uss se | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Rooh maine kahaa thaa ki qataa meN taknikii nukte ghazal vaale hote haiN aur ek unvaaN vaalaa nuktaa nazm kaa hotaa hai...aapne nazm vaalii baat to nibaahii hai is qataa meN magar vo taknikii nukte ghaayab haiN...! husn kaa wo hai par waanaa na mil uss se tujhe degaa na wo chaahat na mil uss se hai aaraaish talab wo bulhawas yaawar na degaa wo tawajjo tu na mil uss se >....aapki is qataa kaa kaafiyaa "chaahat" hai jo duusre she'r meN nadaadard hai...!...mumkin hai merii baat samajh aayii ho aapko lekin is se ek baat pataa chaltii hai ke ab Delhi door nahii aapke liye aap jald hi achchii qataa pesh kareNgii..! aapkaa chhoTa sa dost Suhel | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Mujhse ek ghaltii ho gayii hai jiske liye maiN aap sab se mu'aafii maaNgtaa huN maine ek baar post karke message Thiik se check nahiiN kiyaa..! to correction note kar leN..jo bold portion meN hai...complete bah'r ye hai...! 1. Bah’r Hazaj Saalim 1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2 Song_1: lage haiN shamma pe pahre zamaane ki nighaahoN ke... Fim: Do Badan Song_2: kisii patthar ki muurat se muhabbat kaa iraadaa hai Film: Hamraaz Sorry : Suhel | ||
| silent_rooh |
arey suhel mujhe ab bhii confusion hai...i m feeling lost....tabhii mein sochun ki hazaj saalim mein kuchh problem kyun nazar aarahaa hai...chhoti ho gayi bahr kya?...aur meine bhi ussu tarah likh diyaa mistake ke saath ab phir se likhna parega... khair ab mei second bahr ka qitaa post kar rahii hun wo dekh lein aap...per sach kahun mujhe ab bhi samjh nahii aarahaa hai... here 2. Bah’r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf (1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2) pashemaan ho tu aisey kaam naa kar rudaade dard e dil aam naa kar muhabbat ke sitam dil mein chhupaa le jazaa ye chaah kii yun aam naa kar | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Rooh dear aapkaa message paR ke khilkhilaa ke haNs paRaa sach meN...! aapke sab samajh meN aa gayaa aur kah rahe ho ke nahiiN aayaa haey! 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 pa she maaN ho tu ai se kaa m naa kar ru daa de dar dedil aa m naa kar >...Rooh kyaa ghazab kaa khayaal pakRaa hai aapne mazaa aa gayaa bas duusre misre meN ek syllable kam hai...!ye dekheN.. "rudaad-e-dard-e-dil yuN aam naa kar" muhabbat ke sitam dil mein chhupaa le ja zaa ye chaa h kii yun aa m naa kar >>...bahut hii khoob...! qataa ise hii kahte haiN jo aapne likhaa ye ek mukammal aur qaabil-e-qabuul qataa hai...! Rooh is qataa ke liye aapko "A" grade duNgaa..! mubaarak ho...! aapkaa chhoTa sa dost Suhel | ||
| silent_rooh |
hahahaha...suhel aap la correction waalii post dekh kar meine bhii sar pakar liyaa tha...hahaha..bahot hansii aayi khud per bhii aur aap per bhii.. ab ye dekhiye aise theek hai na 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 pa she maan ho tu ai sey kaa m naa kar fa saa naa dar d kaa yun aa m naa kar ab theek hai? | ||
| Sunita Username: Sunita Registered: 05-2005 |
suhel ji mai qutaa pesh kar rahi huN jo ki Bah’r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf mai hai (1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2) aap please check kar leN. judaayii aag siine mai lagaa de mujhe yeh jiite jii chaahe jalaa de na kam ho gi muhabbat ab kabhi bhi jo denii ho mujhe yeh ab sazaa de sunita | ||
| silent_rooh |
arey upar waaley qitaa mein aap ne likha ke ek syllable kam hai..muhje lagaa ki aap ne kahaa ki ek ziyadaa hai..iss liye meine badal ke likh diyaa ab aap ye hazaj saalim mein phir likhaa hai... 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 khudaa jaaney khataa kyaa ho gayii, kyun wo ruthaa mujhse badaa thaa ziist se jo raabtaa, kyun wo chhutaa mujhse bahot naaraaz hai wo ke nahii ab yaad bhii kartaa maraasim wo ki jis se thii hayaat, kyun wo chhutaa mujhse | ||
| Sunita Username: Sunita Registered: 05-2005 |
suhel ji mai apni doosri assignment post kar rahi huN,please check kar leN tire diidaar ki hasrat mujhe kitna satati hai tiri khamoshiyoN se ab to meri jaan jaati hai tu bhi sun le sadaa meri mujhe na aazmaana tu suna hai dil ke taroN ko khamoshi tod jaati hai | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Rooh aapkii is qataa ko dekhte haiN... khudaa jaaney khataa kyaa ho gayii, kyun wo ruthaa mujhse badaa thaa ziist se jo raabtaa, kyun wo chhutaa mujhse bahot naaraaz hai wo ke nahii ab yaad bhii kartaa maraasim wo ki jis se thii hayaat, kyun wo chhutaa mujhse >>...sabkuchh Thiik hai magar ek baat aapko bataaooN aapne ruThaa ko "1-2" break kiyaa hai magar "ruuThaa" sahii lafz hai yaane "2-2" isii liye aapkaa kaafiyaa qataa meN fiT nahiiN hotaa..! aap apnaa kaafiyaa badal deN to baat ban jaayegii ye suurat dekheN...! khudaa jaane khataa kyaa ho gayii kyuN hai khafaa mujhse jise chaahaa tha maine ho gayaa kyuNkar judaa mujhse bahut naaraaz hai wo ke nahii ab yaad bhii kartaa luTaa detii maiN tan man vo agar kartaa vafaa mujhse ----------------------------------------------- to rooh aapko ek qataa aur isii bah'r meN post karnii paRegii...! Suhel | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Sunita lagtaa hai raat soyii nahiiN assign. karne meN guzaar dii shaabaash..>! judaayii aag siine mai lagaa de mujhe yeh jiite jii chaahe jalaa de na kam ho gi muhabbat ab kabhi bhi jo denii ho mujhe yeh ab sazaa de >...vaah! good bas aakhirii she'r ke aakhirii line meN "yeh" ki jagah "tuu" kar deN vaise "yeh" bhii chalegaa...! iske aapko "A" grade detaa huN ------------------------------------------------ tire diidaar ki hasrat mujhe kitna satati hai tiri khamoshiyoN se ab to meri jaan jaati hai tu bhi sun le sadaa meri mujhe na aazmaana tu suna hai dil ke taroN ko khamoshi tod jaati hai >...bahut khoob bas duusre she;r ke pahle misre meN "tu" ki takraar hai do baar 'tu" kaa istemaal maayub samjhaa jaataa hai...! "tu bhi sun le sadaa meri mujhe naa aazmaaN yuN ab" iske bhii aapko "A" grade milte haiN mubaarak ho..! aur mehnat kareN...ek din kaamyaabii zaroor milegii..! | ||
| Sunita Username: Sunita Registered: 05-2005 |
suhel sach keh rahe haiN aap? mujhe vishwaas hi nahiN ho raha kii maine theek likha hai.aap ko kaise pataa raat soyii nahiN? vaise soyii is liye nahiN kyuNki party mai thi,enjoy kar rahi thi na kii pad rahi thi.Shukriya kii aapne itna kuch sikhaaya hai tabhi to likh payii huN. sunita | ||
| jalees sherwani |
chhote miyan,yah jo rooh hain,badi bazla sanj waqe huee hain,mujh se kehti hain ki urdu nahin aati aur qat'aat main bulhawas aur yaawar jaise saqeel alfaaz istaimaal karti haiN.kya kaha jaye ise?maza le rahi haiN hamari qallashi-E_zabaN ka? kher aapki beher ki qaid se aazaad chan qat'aat pesh haiN. fitratan jo ghareeb hota hai. uska lehjaa ajeeb hota hai. janta hai jo anaa ki qeemat. zindagi se qareeb hota hai. pyar karo manzil mat dhoondo. maujoN maiN saahil mat dhoondo. husn se,aur ummeed wafa ki. tasveeroN maiN dil mat dhoondo. fankaar yahan kam haiN kalaakaar bahut hain. is waste is desh maiN bekaar bahut haiN. har shakhs samajhta hai ki wo sabse bada hai. is daur maiN is fikr ke beemaar bahut haiN. aapki rai ke intezaar maiN aapka apna sa jalees | ||
| silent_rooh |
hahahahaha....pehley to mei apnaa qitaa post kar dun...baad mein bataati hun apnaa urdu secret...hahahaha..bahot hansii arahii hai mujhe..bahot hii ziyaadaa... bahr hazaj saalim n merii baat suntaa hai n apnii baat kartaa hai miley jab bhii mujhe wo to jahaan ki baat karta hai zubaan pe naa kabhii aaye hai usskii lafz chaahat ke siwaa ulfat sanam saarey jahaan kii baat kartaa hai | ||
| silent_rooh |
haan to jaleees sahab ab aap ko mein apnaa urdu ka secret bataaun....asal mein agar aap dekhengey ki ebazm kii site open kartey hii discussion forun ke saath ek dictionary bhii hai..aur wo manjeet ji ne merey khayal mein humarey use karney ke liye hi banaii hai..to mein likhtey waqt use dictionary ka bharpur istemaal kartii hun... i think about something to write and when i fall short of words i try to find the exact word that matches my thot..bas yahii hai raaz merii urdu kaa.. mei koi mazey nahii le rahii hun....aap sab se guidance le rahii bas...aur ye sach hai | ||
| Alok |
Suhel Ji, Mera assignment bhi check kar lijiye! 1). Bah'r Hazaz Saalim "Kisii kii nargisii aa.N.khe.N hamaarii jaan letii hai.N Magar yah jaan kuchh kam thii to ab IImaan letii hai.N Wo aa.N.khe.N jinko hum apnaa muqaddar maan baithe the Kaha.N bhoole se bhi humko wo apnaa maan letii hai.N" Doosara sher kuchh is tarah bhi likhaa hai: - "Wo aa.N.khe.N jinko hum apnaa muqaddar maan baithe hai.N Mile bhi gar to chaadar sharm kii wo taan letii hai.N" Mujhe to pahla jyada pasand hai. Aapko jo bhi pasand ho uska mulyankan kar lijiye. 2). Bah'r Hazaz Musaddas Mahzuuf "Kabhii ulphat ki had se hum gujar jaate Terii naazo-adaa par hum to mar jaate Ahad ulphat ka hotaa khalq hii tak Khudaa tak hum to har soorat magar jaate" Mujhe ek sawaal bhi poochana hai. Kya Qatta aur Rubaaii ek hi hai.N? Yadi nahi, to dono men kya antar hai? | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Alok maiN aapkaa assign. jald hii check karuuNgaa abhii zaraa vaqt ki killat hai...! aapne jo savaal kiyaa hai uskaa javaab de detaa huN qataa aur rubaaii bilkul alag haiN ek duusre se....jahaaN tak maiN jaantaa huN Rubaaii ke apne set of bah'r hote haiN aur jismeN Ek misraa baRaa aur duusraa chhoTaa hotaa hai....! | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
1). Bah'r Hazaz Saalim "Kisii kii nargisii aa.N.khe.N hamaarii jaan letii hai.N Magar yah jaan kuchh kam thii to ab IImaan letii hai.N Wo aa.N.khe.N jinko hum apnaa muqaddar maan baithe the Kaha.N bhoole se bhi humko wo apnaa maan letii hai.N" Doosara sher kuchh is tarah bhi likhaa hai: - "Wo aa.N.khe.N jinko hum apnaa muqaddar maan baithe hai.N Mile bhi gar to chaadar sharm kii wo taan letii hai.N" >>>>.....Alok bahut pyaarii qataa pesh kii hai aapne lekin aapkaa duusraa she'r jo aapko pasand hai mujhe khaas jachaa nahiiN balke duusre vaalaa she'r mujhe bahut pasand aayaa vo is liye ke chaadar aapne as simlii use kii hai palkoN ke liye aur is misre ki zabaaN bhii bahut saaf aur ravaaN hai ghaaliban..! aapko is qataa ke maiN "A+" detaa huN..mubaarak ho Mujhe to pahla jyada pasand hai. Aapko jo bhi pasand ho uska mulyankan kar lijiye. 2). Bah'r Hazaz Musaddas Mahzuuf "Kabhii ulphat ki had se hum gujar jaate Terii naazo-adaa par hum to mar jaate Ahad ulphat ka hotaa khalq hii tak Khudaa tak hum to har soorat magar jaate >>>>.......Alok aapne is qataa meN bah'r ki gaRbaR kar dii vo isliye ke aapkii radiif bah'r meN fiT nahiiN hotii aapkii qataa kaa teesraa misraa bah'r meN hai baakii misroN meN "jaate" kaa "te" izaafii hai..!khayaal kii ruu se qataa bahut pyaarii hai..! aapko is qataa ke "c" grade detaa huN aur aapko overall "B+" grade hai...!..aap ho sake to koii alternative is qataa kii pesh kar sakte haiN...! khaak'saar Suhel 'Ulfat' | ||
| silent_rooh |
chotey se dost ye kyaa baat huii..lagtaa hai meraa chhotaa sa qitaa aap ko pasand nahii aaya...dekhaa aur koi comment bhii nahii...bahot dukh huaa mujhe phir post kar rahii hun..buraa hai to buraa bol do...shayad aap bhool gaye ke ye qitaa aap ke dekhne ke liye hii post kiyaa thaa yahan...aur aap ke kehney pe hii likhaa thaa bahr hazaj saalim n merii baat suntaa hai n apnii baat kartaa hai miley jab bhii mujhe wo to jahaan ki baat karta hai zubaan pe naa kabhii aaye hai usskii lafz chaahat ke siwaa ulfat sanam saarey jahaan kii baat kartaa hai Regards Rooh | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Rooh maine aapkii ye qataa dekhii hii nahiiN phir bhii ghaltii to huii hai mujhse...Sorry kahne se kaam chal jaayegaa kyaa..? n merii baat suntaa hai n apnii baat kartaa hai miley jab bhii mujhe wo to jahaan ki baat karta hai zubaan pe naa kabhii aaye hai usskii lafz chaahat ke siwaa ulfat sanam saarey jahaan kii baat kartaa hai >>>...qataa puurii tarah se bah'r meN hai magar maine aapko jo baat us ghazal ke mut'aallik bataanii vo is qataa meN bhii hai...! aap shaayad ghazal ke baakii nuktoN se sahii se vaaqif nahiiN haiN...aapki ghazal aur is qataa meN mujhe kaafiyaa nazar nahiiN aayaa jo kii bahut baDii kamii hai...! aapko example ke liye samjhaataa huN...! baakii sab bhii dhyaan se paDheN... "dil-e-naadaaN tujhe huaa kyaa hai aakhir is dard kii davaa kyaa hai (Matlaa) hamko unse hai vafaa kii ummeed jo nahiiN jaante vafaa kyaa hai" (Misra) Ghazal kaa pehlaa she'r matlaa hotaa hai jiske dono misroN meN kaafiyaa aur radiif aate "dil-e-naadaaN tujhe huaa kyaa hai aakhir is dard kii davaa kyaa hai (Matlaa) ismeN Kaafiya : "huaa" aur "davaa" hai aur radiif : "kyaa hai" jo puurii ghazal meN ek hii hotii hai hamko unse hai vafaa kii ummeed jo nahiiN jaante vafaa kyaa hai" (Misra) >...duusre She'r ke duusre misre meN phir kaafiyaa hotaa aur radiif hotii hai...yahaaN "vafaa" kaafiyaa hai...kahne kaa matlab hai ke kaafiyaa same vajan vaale lafz hote haiN...! | ||
| Alok |
Suhel Ji, Lagta hai maine Bah'r note karne men galti kar di thi. Ab maine usi qataa ko sudhaar kar likha hai. Jara ise dekhen: - Bah’r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf (1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2) "Kabhi ulphat ki had se hum gujarte Teri naazo-adaa par hum to marte Ahad ulphat ka hotaa khalq hi taq Magar hum to Khudaa se bhi gujarte" Iske mutallik apni islaah dijiye. | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
"Kabhi ulphat ki had se hum gujarte Teri naazo-adaa par hum to marte Ahad ulphat ka hotaa khalq hi taq Magar hum to Khudaa se bhi gujarte" Alok bhaaii agar bah'r ki diqqat na hotii to mujhe pahle vaalii qataa isse bahtar naar aa rahii hai khayaal kii ruu se...! amooman gujaarne kaa ta'aalluk kisii raah yaa waqt se hotaa hai khudaa se gujarne ki tarkiib samajh se baahar hai...aapko maine overall marking de dii hai aapko ab agle assign. ke liye taiyaar honaa hai...! Suhel | ||
| gauhar |
suhelji aadaab, muaff karna do roz se internet band tha,to yahaaN aa nahi paai,aur abhi bhi waqt kam mila haiN.jitnaa waqt milaa,usmeiN ki gayi ik koshish aapke saamne pesh karti huiN. 1) Bah'r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf : 1222-1222-122 nayii ab baat kya hai zindagii meiN wahii dard-o-diloN ka silsilaa hai wahii zaalim wahii sang dil vo kaafir mujhe ulfat ke khaatir phir milaa hai gauhar | ||
| gauhar |
suhelji aadaab, doosri qataa pes kar rahi huiN.. 1. Bah’r Hazaj Saalim 1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2 madad dil ko bahut hai yeH ki nazroN ka ishaaraa hai jahaaN ko jeet leNge ham agar teraa sahaaraa hai zehan meiN haiN terii soorat o dil meiN haiN terii ulfat terii jis meiN khushii hai woH sitam sehnaa gawaaraa hai. gauhar | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
gauhar dear maiN bhii 3 din ke baad sirf aapke liye cafe aayaa huN...gauhar kyaa aapko meraa naam pasand nahiiN hai agar pasand hai to ye iske aage piiche "ji" vaigherah kyuN chipkaa detii ho...mujhe ye bahut kharaab lagtaa hai ek baar Rooh ko DaaNt paDh chukii hai isii vajh se...! chaliye dekhte haiN...! 1) Bah'r Hazaj Musaddas Mahzuuf : 1222-1222-122 nayii ab baat kya hai zindagii meiN wahii dard-o-diloN ka silsilaa hai wahii zaalim wahii sang dil vo kaafir mujhe ulfat ke khaatir phir milaa hai >>>.....qataa maasha'allah bahut hii pyaarii hai magar ismeN ek jagah khaTak naa hotii to maiN aapno "A+" detaa magar iske aapko "A" grade milte haiN...!"vo" kaafir" par zabaaN aTaktii hai..! ------------------------------------------------- doosri qataa pes kar rahi huiN.. 1. Bah’r Hazaj Saalim 1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1-2-2-2 madad dil ko bahut hai yeH ki nazroN ka ishaaraa hai jahaaN ko jeet leNge ham agar teraa sahaaraa hai zehan meiN haiN terii soorat o dil meiN haiN terii ulfat terii jis meiN khushii hai woH sitam sehnaa gawaaraa hai. >....subhan'allah bahut hii khoob iske maiN aapko "A+" detaa huN...! ------------------------------------------------- Alok, Gauhar, Rooh, Sunita pehle assig. meN Alok first the, Rooh Second, Gauhar Third aur Sunita Fourth....! Magar duusre assign. meN Gauhar First hai, Sunita Second, Alok Third, Rooh Fourth...! Naya Assignment meN shaayad kal yaa aaj hii post karuNgaa...! ------------------------------------------------- aap sabkaa chhoTa sa dost Suhel | ||
| Arun BeKhabar |
Alok bhaai, I am impressed with your qataa. ab to ham readers ki chaandee ho gayee hai. Arun BeKhabar  | ||
| Arun BeKhabar |
gauhar ji, apa ne sach A+ kaam kiyaa hai. meri to 'vo kaafir' pe hbii zbaannahii aTaktee, khaasakar agar 'vo' pe jyaada zor na deN to. Superb! ham shero-shaayree paRhne waaloN ki to bahaar aa gayii hai. Arun BeKhabar | ||
| Suhel Khan Username: Suhel Registered: 04-2001 |
Arun miyaaN vahii ke do baar istemaal karne ki vajh se zabaaN itnii smooth ho gayii kii "vo" par aTaknii hii thii vaise bah'r kii diqqat nahiiN hai...! | ||
| Arun BeKhabar |
Suhel, Your explanation completely amazed me. bahut acchhee pakaD hai aap ki. sach bilkul 'vahii' vazah hai. Arun BeKhabar |